please next chapter

Okay I like this idea but I'm not 100% sure on how you treat some of the characters especially Sun and Neptune, the latter only seems to be a pervert in this one. I mean I know he sees himself as a ladies man but still what your doing is too much.

another reading fict? im in

You know I'm still waiting for Blake to fucking apologise to Jaune for strangling him at the beginning, he didn't even fucking do anything wrong his other self in the book did it he has never said anything about her heritage, so what fucking gave her the right to try killing him, again when he didn't do anything, sorry but I'm never gonna be OK with this fic until Blake makes it up to Jaune.

great story love reading book/books stories try and update as soon and often as u can. keep it up

Please continue the story, I love it!

I luv this.

nice reactions. white knight

Well look forward to seeing what reaction everyone has especially Blake. Don't remember to much earlier on the story but I'm sure everyone will see how far Jaune is willing to go for his friends.

Wow...I honestly thought this fic was dead. Glad to see it's not.

the comment below seems to be insulting. they take stories to seriously. but this story is not that bad. I like the idea but you present it a little differently than I thought it would be. don't stop now. keep on going and give it your best.

"I'm not going to lie this was disappointing, I mean you just have them start reading a book, most people when writing a reaction fic usually lets the cast know they are reacting to another world, otherwise, it just comes off as if their just reading a book.

Also, can I point out how horrible these so-called "friends" are to Jaune.
I mean the very first thing in this story is Team RWBY is insulting Jaune behind his back.
not to mention you have Blake try to kill Jaune because his book version said she's a Faunus, but the real Sun who has been going around telling everyone her secret just gets a glare what BS is that, oh and she never apologies for her action because god forbid if someone said sorry to Jaune of all people, and that is the main problem I have with this, the casts only has proper reaction when it gives them an excuse to attack or insult Jaune, but when Jaune does something amazing or kind, they don't seem to care not even his own team.

you know what I'm glad you stopped this because everyone in this is just giant assholes to Jaune, and I don't need that."

To the person who wrote this...I say go rot in fucking hell.

Al fin volviste a actualizar, espero que puedas actualizar mas rapido

Great job nice

...ahh, the calm before the magnitude 8 earthquake right after the hundred mile per hour storm