I enjoy your writing... your story was interesting too...not what normally appeals to me but you write so well that I was compelled to continue to the end. Job well done! Congratulations on completing and to sticking to your guns. We need original voices like yours in the fan fiction community.

*Sobs uncontrollably while holding 3 year old son*

The ending is just too much.

This is the second fanfiction I have read by you and I knew someone important was going to die. I just never saw that coming. Your writing is sublime and I can't stop reading. Please, for my delicate heart, no more endings like this.

I seriously love your stories. They are so complex and thoughtful and fleshed out. The characters stay within their confines and make their choices with those confines in mind - keeping them in character. Their past misdeeds are not forgotten and are taken into account with their interactions with those around them. Misdeeds are not forgotten just because they are married and have a child together. You bring a reality to the story - that there isn't always a happy ever after. That there is darkness to life and some endings are really unfair. The power that people have over others and how it is abused without them ever being held accountable for it.

I love the relationships in your stories. That there are still bits of kindness and joy. I like the friendships that are developed. I admit that sometimes I wish there was a happy ever after - sometimes I read to the parts before everything goes to hell and stop - just so I can pretend that they do end up content as a family.

One thing I do appreciate is your wit - there are lines in there that are just perfect and I die. Sith Married, The Force didn't bring you a girlfriend Ben. Sometimes they catch me off guard and it is fucking hilarious.

I really appreciate your writing. I apologize that I am not that great at articulating my feelings and thoughts on just how wonderful you are. I wish I could do better so I can do you justice in my appreciation for your writing.

I just can't read any more, I'm afraid. You've reduced me to tears reading about Rey as a complete victim of abuse, beaten into submission. For me, there's no coming back from this for unremorseful Ren. I don't care if she and Ren do manage to forge a way forward from here now, it's not the kind of relationship the Rey in my head deserves, not with this treatment as a basis. Too dark for me.

Really enjoyed the story. Keep up the hard work.

Ok. I found this tonight and now I'm on chapter 19, it's 2am and I can't put it down! You are absolutely an amazing writer! It's dark and I love it! And I love Sheev/ Han! "Daddy leave. You're dismissed" is something exactly that my little boy would say! And relationships are hard when you have a child with someone and complicated! And Rey has NO ONE! I've been there! You stay... you survive... you make the best of things for your child. I absolutely love this story! Ok going to read the rest!

Oh, god. This may be the darkest freaking fanfiction I've ever read.

Kinda bummed by Hux's death. At least he was kind to Rey.

I feel second-hand degradation for Rey. WTF is this?

I can't believe what I'm reading...

I think Hux's soft spot for Rey is the sweetest thing in this story. I hope he continues being warm with her even after he finds out her true identity. She's in an impossible situation, after all, and was not really with the Resistance in TFA. Please tell me that Rey does not "fall in love" with Kylo Ren after this. He raped her, sexually exploited her in blackmail to stay with her son, and beat her in front of the audience. W.T.F.

I'm just wondering when they are going to address the elephant in the room that is Han's conception.

Milo wants Rey to play happy family with Kylo Ren, but he doesn't strike me as the type to conveniently forget about the fact that Kylo raped her...

I love that he says that Lord Vader permitted no slaves at Bast Castle...because he, too, was a slave like his mother.

I hope that Snoke makes good on his threat and rey learns the truth about Kyle in the sequel. The pure emotion! You are really excellent at it