| Reviews for Love in Wartime |
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englishtutor chapter 18 . 11/16/2016 This is utterly delightful. I have adored your story all along, but this last chapter is a triumph! So many wonderful lines! Every word is perfect! I don't care what the creators come up with for Series Four-your story is my head-canon from now on. Thank you so much for this. I am just so sad that it's over. Can you please write a sequel? |
englishtutor chapter 17 . 11/10/2016 Oh. My. Gosh. This is beautiful beyond words! I adore this chapter; you've rendered this scene perfectly in every respect. Every line is lovely and wonderful. You are my hero. Thank you for this. |
Captain Evermind chapter 16 . 11/3/2016 I love your Sherlock, I really do. He's utterly incorrigible, and just right. I loved his insistence on "young Sherlock" and "It really hurt. I had to go to hospital for weeks". :-) |
englishtutor chapter 16 . 11/3/2016 Oh my gosh, I love this so much! I love your background story for Mary and I adore Sherlock trying to talk her into staying. You've kept him more perfectly in character than just about anything I've ever read. Thank you, thank you for this! I don't care now what atrocious thing the creators might do to Mary in the new season-your story is now the true one in my book. |
englishtutor chapter 15 . 10/30/2016 Another wonderful chapter. I love your depiction of Janine. And you are filling in the gaping hole the creators left in this series perfectly. Thank you for this! |
Captain Evermind chapter 15 . 10/29/2016 Great chapter. Janine always makes everything more amusing. Nice touch about the newspapers. |
wynnleaf chapter 15 . 10/28/2016 I really like your Mary! I'm glad Janine came to visit and they are friends still! Really, your Mary rings much more true to the series to me, than in most stories. Can't wait to see when John and Sherlock get back into the picture. |
englishtutor chapter 14 . 10/18/2016 I have read your "Scenes from a Marriage" a number of times and it is gold! And though you may be slow and leave your faithful readers panting on the edges of our seats, your chapters are always well worth waiting for. Thank you for this. The peeks you give us into Mary's and John's heads during this time are so insightful and certainly clear up a lot of the murk the creators left us with in the series. Again, thank you! |
englishtutor chapter 13 . 10/2/2016 Oh, marvelous job! You've explained everything so well and so plausibly. Thank you for this. It's truly a gift! |
ElleMe chapter 12 . 9/30/2016 This is such a brilliant story, and it just gets better and better. I look forward to these updates so much :) I love John having Mary search Sherlock's room, it's officially canon for me now. And I'm so so soooo excited to see what you do with what's to come. It'll be fantastic, no doubt! Spectacular chapter as always! |
englishtutor chapter 12 . 9/20/2016 This fabulous chapter is filled with treats! I love Mary's relationship with Mrs. H. Her search of Sherlock's room was great fun. And your reveal about how she got into Magnussen's office is inspired. Have I told you how much I'm loving this story? |
Captain Evermind chapter 12 . 9/17/2016 Another great chapter. Loved the insight into what Mrs H. gets up to in her time off! |
ElleMe chapter 11 . 9/13/2016 I'm so excited that Mary's creeping back into assassin mode and can't wait to see how you tackle what's to come! I also LOVE the "visibly bored" bit; it makes me feel like you're setting up a justification that even the writers could have presented a bit better. I can never help but think that finding out about Mary's past made John more attracted to Mary-and that perhaps the reason he was so angry with her was because her big reveal illuminated that difficult fact to him. But I digress... As always, you're writing is consistently brilliant and the juxtaposition of the light-hearted humorous moments with the dark, suspenseful subplot is perfect. It feels just like the show. Looking forward to the next chapter especially! |
englishtutor chapter 11 . 9/12/2016 I could not love this more! I love all the little, wonderful things Mary is learning about John, which draws her to him even more. I love the insight you give us into her mind. You explain things so much more clearly than the creators did! I am thrilled by this story more and more with every chapter. |
wynnleaf chapter 11 . 9/5/2016 Very much enjoying this story! I'm curious to see how you handle Mary and Sherlocks interactions. To me, in series 3 in the first 2 episodes sherlock bounces from clueless with his friends and what they might see as immature, with occasional bits of serious maturity, but in episode 3 he's mostly serious and more knowing (albeit surprised by Mary). I personally don't see this as contradictory, although some people do. But it makes his interaction with Mary in HLV more interesting. Anyway I'm looking forward into seeing how you handle it. And of course Mycroft isn't stupid, so I'm wondering what you'll do there as well. Can't wait to read more. BTW, I like Mary a lot in the show and like the rare story that portrays her in a very 3 dimensional way. |