Reviews for Missing the Obvious
Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2019
Oh my gosh I just love your writing! Found it through Pokemon at Archive of our Own, and I have been readibg almost non-stop. It brings me so much joy! Your theories and insight to different characters and situations really causes me to stop and think and I love it! Thank you so much!
Maddy02 chapter 1 . 6/12/2018
So, this went straight on my favourites purely for the conversations Nino and Adrien have.

Because "Learn about dead people" IS absolutely 14-year-old-boy vocabulary and sweet as Adrien is he IS still a 14 year old boy and you nailed it. A lot of writers seem to focus on the "Sweet" at the expense of the "Boy", but you managed both.

That and it's a brilliant view of the whole Animan Saga, and you also managed to get Nino "Not chill" side, just as well as his "Chill" side.

Actually you're just turning fandom tropes on their head and doing it so well. Do you actually write for the show?
Sage of Wind Dragons chapter 1 . 3/18/2018
YES. teenagers! paris! French! but also TEENAGERS going at ti with toehrs and dating and asking questions and causal...
I mean I have one where they atualyl do teenage drunk shenangin THINGS which leads to accidental sorta of purpose four way talks casually cause bisexual YES type of thigns which is hilarious.
but like Marrinete and Adrien haven't TOLD folks yet and muha.

but i liked this stumble! very entertaining.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/28/2017
Don't you dare ruin my ship! ADRIENETTE LIVES.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/26/2017
Holy good god dann my friend. You have blown my mind. I am, I am at a loss to be honest. Your characterizations are killer. I live for them my god. The dialogue was so frealing great. Your Adrien may be the best Ive seen. I cant stress that enough. This was out of this flipping world.
YugiKitten chapter 1 . 12/12/2016
Lol frusttated Adrien
In the series he seems to turn negative emotions into positive ones
Or let them be overridden by positive ones
Disapointment seems to be the only nehative emotion he cant convert
So im sure Ninos feat counts as an achievement
Katz4 chapter 1 . 9/12/2016
Nino and Adrien BROTP thank you thankyou for feeding this great need I have.

This fic is so funny! Legit lol

I love Adrien in this. And Alya, thinking he's legit crazy.
Adrien's life is so unbelievable screwed up/.
Everything is unbelievable screwed up.
Like, wow.

From a literary standpoint, the way you mention Akuma attacks and Adrien's weird habits is really effective. It makes the reader feel really pleased with themselves because they know what's really going on with out actually being told. Great writing, that.
The Green Seer chapter 1 . 6/18/2016
I love it! This is so funny and I adore Nino/Adrien friendship! They should totally get some more spotlight! It's great seeing such insight into the characters, I love this show so much! And Plagg is a mischievous grandpa!
Katz4 chapter 1 . 5/13/2016
My day was just made so many times I think I broke something

Whywhywhywhywhy are there not more stories about Nino and Adrien! They are literally the best. They give me LIFE! Please! Why isn't there more!
The Blue Miraculer chapter 1 . 5/7/2016
THIS IS SO FREAKING AMAZING!
Will you continue? :D
CursedRedRose chapter 1 . 5/7/2016
Man this story made me pity Adrien so much, nobody would be able to deal with that level of teenage crushing on top of everything else. It's so good, I really liked the insight into all of the characters.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2016
Amazing fiction! And I like it!
KiannaCat chapter 1 . 5/6/2016
Okay, ohmygod, this was BRILLIANT.
I LOVE HOW YOU WROTE THEM. ITS SO PERFECT AND IN CHARACTER! :D