Will you be following the avatar story strictly or will you be changing it up more?

pretty good joke. It's been LONGER THAN THREE MONTHS.

What would be the chances they'd call him Ed and not a more fire Nation sounding name? What, did someone get a magical premonition and the name just felt right? Please at least TRY to justify the more outlandish elements if this story. And does no one think it's weird he has gold hair? Even if there were people with blond hair in the Avatar universe, which I'd be willing to accept, I expect it would be pretty rare. And seeing as no one else in Royal family seems to have it, you'd think that would make people suspicious, either of something jumping the fence or some spirit mumbo jumbo. You know, it probably would have been easier and more interesting if you just had Ed reincarnate as Zuko or something. I hope the next chapter does something to make up for the first.

Aw, for some reason I think Zuko is adorable now.

So, when Edward supposedly died and got reincarnated, were you going off of the 2003 series or is it like Edward lived to be an old man died then reincarnated into the avatar verse? And I'm also wondering why you made Zuko a peasant. Why didn't you make him like, Edward's brother or something? These things have been bothering me as I was reading the story.

Keep writing

Great back story! It's really interesting!

I think scar working alongside sparky sparky boom man could be cool. And Izumi and hoenheim making an alchemical army to fight the fire nation

So... You just kinda skipped season 1, huh? Did the thugs happen and we didn't see them, or did they just fly strait there?

1 no iroh in this world?
2 will his dreams show him Roy's flame alchemy, or just his own specialty? Speaking of, does Roy have his alchemy?
3 how'd they all wind up here?

A good start, with as many questions as hints. I can't wait to see where it goes

This story deserves many, many more reviews, follows, and favorites! I can't wait to see what happens next! You are a truly amazing author, and you really play the audience. Can't wait for more!

Great job! I was busy laughing at quite a few parts! Those bits were hilarious !

Great job for the chapter! I look forward to the next, and I was wondering: Will Ed meet Izumi in this?

Going into the spirit world and discovering a revelation about the Truth would be good as would Mustang using his full knowledge and strength against a fire bender.
That Mustang vs lust was badass.