I'm curious where this is going. I love the fact you used ophis, turned kushina into a dragon and hopefully pair Orphis with Naru. Keep up the great work.

This story has great potential. I wish that you continued it.

Pretty good story. Can't wait for more.

Great chapter even if it didn't happen too much in it. I barely can wait for an update!

Making Ophis so emotional is great, the title of the child of prophecy comes with perks.

Interesting so far, but I have one criticism.

The use of japanese words by seems wholly unnecessary and cringey. I can understand adding honorifics when appropriate, like when some1 from the elemental nations is speaking or being spoken to by some1 with language magic, but having Great Red say "baka"? That just breaks immersion. I doubt he's speaking english in the first place, so since you're already basically translating what he's saying to english, leave out stuff like that.

Not bad at all, very unique approach. Exposition was done well, and the way you’ve tied Naruto and Ophis together was a bit inspired. Keep it up.

Thanks .

Thanks

This is quite interesting.
A premise I haven't seen before and - as I said, an interesting one.
Well written as well.

Would be interested in knowing what size Kushina is and if that is set in stone.
Because I do somewhat wonder if it shouldn't be possible for her to just fly Naruto out of there and set him up in some orphanage outside Konohas infulence (if they can somewhat get over it that he was delivered by a dragon).

Would also be interested to see a perspective from other ... 'friends' of Kushina.
There are bound to be some, right? And it should be recognisable for them whos son he is.
Well, at least if it is somewhat integrable into the story.

Other than that .. I hope the next update doesn't take 1.5 years :P

Cheers

Is " A Stray Devil" even active anymore!?

We have 60 days before it goes to Congress, we have another chance to get it expounds, and it happens if we get enough people we can get it rebuke.

damn straight

I'm from Canada, do you think I can do something to help or is it only for Americans?

jeez, fix that update so people can read it.

This is just really interesting and I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue