Please look up for translations before using words.

It was a beautiful story.

One of those that makes you smile through the waves of tears.

This was an amazing story that i couldnt stop reading! It made me want to start writing a story based off of this on wattpad. Is that ok with you?

I’ve been reading naruto fics for years and honestly, I’m fed up with people using Japanese words where they don’t belong. Why do you feel the need to have certain words Japanese but most English? You didn’t even say the meaning to any of them, so I’m assuming you want me to either look it up or you think I should know what it means? Pick one, you writing in English or Japanese? And no it doesn’t add to the “experience” of reading your fic, it makes it tedious, frustrating, and in the end take me out of the story. So all in all I couldn’t make it through the 2nd chapter. 2/10 fanfic

I bawled like a baby. I really enjoyed this story.

Wow. Your writing is amazing! This is one of the few fics that brought tears to my eyes. Thank you!

AHHHH SUCH A GOOD STORY.. 9/10 [for me] I-I JUST I DONT LIKE YOAI.. and there was yaoi

i thought that naruto would do when the hokage told him his rank, is tell her " then i guess im no longer a konoha ninja" that would have been cool.

ALSO SAKURA IS USELESS I HAVE "NEVER" HEARD THAT ONE

Ummm... in the Naruto series they openly acknowledge the existence of the "Pure World". That would be the Shinto version of Heaven.

Not just that, but souls are repeatedly pulled out of the Pure World to reanimate bodies.

Was sort of enjoying the ending of this story despite the womanly Kakashi and the overly the top theatrics of Naruto. Then you had to throw in that at the end, when it doesn't even apply to this series.

You seem to be over-exaggerating Kakashi and Naruto's relationship. Kakashi didn't practically raise him. Naruto didn't even know who Kakashi was until age 12. He was on Kakashi's genin team for less than a year before he left with Jiraiya. During his time on Team 7, Kakashi spent the majority of it making sure Sasuke stayed sane and loyal.

So when did this great bond develop? I always felt it was very one-sided even in the manga. Naruto was desperate for bonds and attention. Kakashi... didn't appear to be nearly as attached beyond having a duty to his student.

And when did they have time to become best friends? The timing between Naruto's return and Jiraiya's death just doesn't allow for it. Plus, Kakashi wasn't even on that mission to infiltrate Orochimaru's lair and find Sasuke.

OMG I started crying halfway through! Loved it Hope to see more!

this was really good. lots of feels all around. thanks for sharing.

oh man the feels with this chapter! so many feels. the translations really help and are greatly appreciated :)

so far pretty good but the constant use of random Japanese words is very annoying especially with no translations.

oui, je suis aussi un peu triste que ça se termine... mais il y a beaucoup d'espoir quelque part, si on regarde bien :)))

encore des câlins et des bisous très forts hihihihihhi

je suis vraiment désolée de dire ça, ça ne vient pas de toi qui as tout respecté le matériau de base et qui écris vraiment comme une vraie déesse, mais c'est juste que je déteste Sakura... mais vraiment beaucoup... mais ce n'est rien :)

et Kakashi est vraiment un pur joyau entre tes mains et ils sont tellement beaux ensemble et je sais que c'était vraiment trop tôt de les mettre ensemble, mais ils s'annoncent superbes et parfaits et j'adore.
encore tellement d'émotions partout partout... ma réalité semble bien terne et pleine d'hypocrisie après t'avoir lue :DDD

merci pour tout ça, merci de t'être donnée corps et âme, j'aimerais tellement suivre ton exemple et te rendre au moins la moitié de la joie que tu m'apportes.

bisous, love always :*:*