Caveman Sherlock is always good!

Yeah, I agree with mychakk. A little rushed, but really fun! KEEP WRITING! It's a great first sherlolly fic! This is an incredibly friendly fandom and we welcome new writers! : ) YAY!

I liked the story! Will there be a continuation with wedding drama, exes reappearing, and Mycroft?

I really enjoyed the first part of the story up to Molly putting Sherlock's pj, after that everything is way to rushed. Sherlock's love proclamation and even marriage proposal are OK, he would go all the way in as soon as he accepts his feelings and what he truly wants, the issue lies with Molly's unquestioning acceptance of his sudden change of attitude. He's been manipulating and using her for years plus she's probably aware of his fake relationship with Janine. At this point she would have been more wary of him and should demand a proper explanation of this out of the blue confession before accepting. Otherwise your writing is quite good and I look forward to your next Sherlolly story! Keep writing! :)

Cute story, I really liked Sherlock following Molly on her date.