*sniff*sniff* I prepared myself since I spoiled myself with the reviews knowing whats to come but that last line. It hit me! Thanks for this

Woah, that ending... I swear my heart skipped a beat. I reread it over, and I realized you wrote everything correctly in correlation for the ending. Excellent work!

I've read this so many times and each time, I forget that Naruto's dead until Kakashi comes in!
This is so sad and heart-wrenching but so beautiful and well written!
Definitely one of my most favourite stories!
I love it so much!

Oh my god, that was awesome, I didn't expect at all, great job, I'm still processing, genius

Holy shit. This ending hit me like a thousand bricks.
I cried. ._.

It flowed so well and had me thinking Saskue was the one who had passed. When the last line hit, I was like shit man the emotions! Very well done.

Plot twist! Reading it twice actually made it seem obvious now :P

Damn, sequel please~! Didn't get that till the end, I don't really get it still..

This story was amazing. I actually had to read it around 4 times to get the gist of it.
So it was naruto who died right and the dead body was his and the entire time he was a like a ghost talking to Sakura and Kakashi even though they couldn't hear him.
Anyways, great story! Really enjoyed it :-)

This fic was great! Really captured the emotion of this arc. You write better than most native English speakers; I can't believe it's your third language.
Just an editorial comment if I may:

It's spelt "deceiving", there's no "s", but I can see why you made the mistake.

Great job dude!

Wow. Just... Wow. The first time through, some things might seem a little out of place, but nothing noticeable. Once you hit that last line, though... It's amazing how much that made the story! Once I read I again, everything made such utter sense...

I sense a sixth sense movie kind of plot here... finish it! seems pretty good!

Dayam! That was good! I did not suspect that at all! Snuck up on me so much that I didn't have any time to shed a tear in sorrow!
Well done!
May your muse be with you :)

Wow, does that mean Naruto's the one who really died?" I'm kind of confused but if I've got this right, Sasuke's the one grieving but can't come to terms with it so now he's wishing it was him and seeing him instead? Either way, it's an awesome mind riddle

Wow usually I pick up quick on stories like these but, this time I was very slow and missed it completely until the last sentence. Although I am wondering why Naruto didn't hear Sasuke but still this was a pretty good plot twist.