I Understand and don't understand everything at the same time

Amazing work. A shame I didn't read this four years but here I am. Stellar job

Pity you won't do more Arkos as you nailed their voices down pretty well.

So instead I'll say: Thank you for writing and sharing this.

Amidst all the Arkos NTR and related crud I've stumbled across, this has been a breath of fresh air. Even with it being published years ago.

Keep coming across small gems like this that can sate my inner romantic and give those two goofballs the ending they actually deserved together.

Ah well..

What is done is done and is next to impossible to get undone.

Unless you count fanfiction, that is.

*shrugs*

But again, thanks for this.

A weary old Curmudgeon, signing off.

Id jerk off to this if it wasn’t for the fact that I am in the ER about to go to surgery because my lung collapsed

Aw, this is just too adorable! Jaune's semblance isn't merely visions, he sees all potential realities and creates the future from these realities, doesn't he? Most interesting. Lovely story! If I can find time, maybe I'll check out some of your others!

Great work.

But out of curiosity, what had become of the Fall Maiden in this story?

Yo. When I read this, I was literally listening to When It Falls. ILLUMANATI CONFIRMED!

The man should always bring condom on his own. Remember that, wrote it in your journal, tattoo it on your arm, tattoo it upside down on your pelvis for a last minute check.

Well this was quite something indeed. Such a shame you decided not to continue with doing Arkos, because you're quite fantastic at it.

Firstly let me say that this is incredibly well written and, while I’m disappointed you chose to close the loop you’ve made with this little “What if?”, I enjoyed it immensely. I’m not much of a fan of Black Sun but I will give BSK a read if only to slake my curiosity on what is different from DYBISC and BSK.

I have more questions regarding your own little cannon, but one this is bothering me: what is Eternal Autumn? I’ve looked for it everywhere I can think but the most I’ve found are your Tumblr announcements on the rough drafts going back to Chapter 14. If you would let me know at your convenience I would be very grateful.

This is one of the funniest things I have ever read, but not in a good way. Please learn what it feels to be touched by a woman that you arent related to before you start writing smut like this.

Wow. This was nice to read but also sad at the same time?
Kinda late to make a review but I just wanted to say I liked it.

"if you aren't pulling your audience's heartstrings, you're not telling a story correctly"

what?! that is so wrong in so many ways. seeing a puppy is more emotional than this. stories aren't about just getting through the audience emotions by a cheap death, in othere words cheap emotions, it's about theme, characters, plot, and meaning.

getting tears from the audience is no where near necessary, if a writer's only reason is to get the audience's emotions then that's a shit writer.

I have never so enlightened and so aroused at the same time. I do not know how I have enough blood for deep thought and raging stiffy, but you managed it. Fucking congrats

I want to cry.

Thank you.