| Reviews for Better off as Friends |
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gingervalkyrie024 chapter 1 . 10/28/2018 My plans for valentines day this year getting drunk on a rooftop lol I love it |
Zeiyuu chapter 1 . 9/8/2017 AAAHAHHHHHHH okay so, I know I was chatting with you a bit while I was reading this, but I just want to say that I LOVED this. It was sad for my Lalu loving heart, but it really made me love Bixlu wayyy more. I love how you write for Bickslow! Jealous Bix is a sad thing to watch :'D I verrryyy much enjoyed the ending to this story. |
samuel.bryant17 chapter 1 . 12/21/2016 I rather liked this, even it has taken me nearly 2 days to finish reading it. (Yes, I'm a slow reader.) I found the part about Bickslow thinking that Laxus might electrically castrate him for knocking-up some random girl a little disturbing, yet funny, because it actually could happen in real life. (I have a warped sense of humor, and morality sometimes. I blame it on growing up listening to, and watching, Buddy Hackett and George Carlin routines. Not too mention my older siblings let me, when I was like 1 and a half years old, watch "Nightmare on Elm Street", "Friday the 13th", and other assorted horror films, as well as "Excalibur", which had FULL FRONTAL NUDITY in it.) I'm really enjoying the sequel to this, "How I Met You", even though it took me nearly 4 hours to read chapter 4. I rather enjoy the backstory that you gave Bickslow in it; he comes from a wealthy aristocratic family but ran away rather than have to marry some girl from another wealthy aristocratic family just to appease his family, and eventually takeover the family business. And low and behold, that same girl that he was supposed to marry turns out to be none other than one Lucy Heartfilia. That is just too damned funny. "Brothers, Sisters, and Unfortunate Husbands" was also really good, and hilarious as fuck. (Sorry for the language. I just can't help myself sometimes.) I'd really like to see that one updated sometime. *CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM AHEAD* But seriously, with as long as this story is you could have broken it down and made like 3 or 4 chapters out of the whole thing. The same can be said for "How I Met You" too. Some of those chapters are just a little long, and could have easily been split into another chapter or two. But hey, they're YOUR stories so you can do what you want with them; I'm just stating my opinion, so please don't take it harshly, or offensively, because I enjoy reading your brilliant works of fiction. I'm TRYING to work on a story of my own, my first (a Jellal x Erza/Mira x Laxus that turns into a Mira x Erza/Laxus x Freed), which I have a plot for but I'm stuck in development, and have kinda gotten sidetracked reading other's stories. :/ |
kittentf chapter 1 . 5/25/2016 Wow. That has to be one of the most accurate portrayals of bad sex I have ever read. I think your Laxus is pretty good, especially considering the plot line of the stories. |
sassykitten1701 chapter 1 . 5/23/2016 Is there going to be another chapter or a sequel to this? |
mel870709 chapter 1 . 5/9/2016 This is a great prequel to himy. I loved your laxus it's how I kinda picture he would be minus the crappy sex hehehe |
GemNika chapter 1 . 5/5/2016 I finally got around to reading this, and I loved it! I can't wait to see how all the things tie into HIMY. And omg that smut... It was perfectly written "bad sex". Thank you for that. |
LadyAllyssa chapter 1 . 4/16/2016 oh awesome i was waiting for this, i love HIMY :) thanks April |
summercharizard chapter 1 . 4/16/2016 you said that you found writing Laxus awkward, but I actually think ykh hit the naik on the head with him! Great job, this fic had me laugh a good few times. Will now try your BixLu fic |
LucyxAnyoneShipper chapter 1 . 4/15/2016 Omg! Lucy's internal monologue while having sex with Laxus the first time had me rolling! I love it! |