Reviews for yesterday we were just children playing soliders
Tenjo chapter 1 . 3/29
I made it to third year. The writing is a bit of a pain and feels way too detached. Harry is annoying. The other characters are overly affectionate and similarly annoying. You change things up but still somehow stick very closely to canon... too closely given the changes. I’m also kind of put off by you changing Harry’s race. It’s not that he’s black that’s the issue, it’s that you felt the need to make such a pointless change. It means nothing and changes nothing from canon, so why bother?
VtrCst chapter 1 . 2/29
How utterly touching ans beautiful!
Thank you :'D
FrozenWave chapter 1 . 10/19/2019
And now I'm crying. Again. Because of this wondeful story. Again.

And no matter how deep it hits, every single time, I keep coming back.
Pygmy Hippo chapter 1 . 7/3/2019
Really great story! I love it!
swishyla chapter 1 . 4/8/2019
So well written. This is an amazing story and It made me feel so many emotions.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/27/2019
I really ended up loving this story, what a gem. I love how you portrayed the different relationships especially Ginny and Harrys as I don't normally ship them. Thanks
musicinjune chapter 1 . 2/23/2019
This is so freaking gorgeous
Sab81790 chapter 1 . 2/18/2019
This was beautiful!
Vivo et Amo chapter 1 . 1/8/2019
This is absolutely phenomenal. Thank you for this!
CarpeDiemMay chapter 1 . 1/2/2019
Despite a few spelling and grammatical errors, this is probably the most well written HP fanfic I've ever read.
I really don't know what else to say besides that. I'm still in slight shock about everything and the ending had me in near tears it was that beautiful.
Thank you. Thank you so much for writing this. I'm an avid reader and sometimes I'm just reading because I'm bored and want something to do, rather than because I'm actually enjoying the story. However, your story had me enthralled from the beginning and I'm sad and disappointed that it's come to an end. In short, please don't change a thing about this. Perhaps just proofread and edit the few spelling and grammar mistakes but other than that... nothing at all needs to change. This was completely perfect and I loved it.
FrozenWave chapter 1 . 11/5/2018
Well... I was not prepared for this story, but I loved it all the same. Once I started reading, I counldn't stop until I reached the end. You can take it as a huge compliment that I was invested enough to cry twice during this, as yours has been the only story out of hundreds to ever cause that.

Masterful piece.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2018
Look I’m pretty sure this is my new cannon I’m dying with how much I loved this and needed this and god this was just amazing and bi Blaise (and maybe Harry) just break my heart, thank you for the beautiful soft boys and badass girls and found family you wrote into this I’m in absolute awe
d3pser1 chapter 1 . 9/13/2018
What an amazing story! Thank you!
Beowolfalien chapter 1 . 7/28/2018
Absolutely amazing.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/24/2018
YAAAASSSSS! Honestly, this is the best short(ish) Harry in Slytherin story i have ever read. The feels! It is amazing.
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