Damn... I thought SilverStorm was rescued by Optimus... Pleasantly surprised by the twist.

*sigh* Of course there's an OC... Okay then...

No, I am your Father!

Yes. Pure yes.

Optimus then passed out on the floor, only to wake up covered in graffiti.

*Screams incoherently out of pure joy*

Omg...! MIKO IS RUSSEL'S MOM! Did not see that coming... Also, didn't RID retcon it so that Ratchet never really stayed on Earth? But, Love it none the less.

I think that Bumblebee should prepare for the fallen after engaging Steeljaw and his pack at the dump while also capturing the various Decepticon criminals such as Nightstrike and Vertebreak while gaining Drift as a new team member as they aim to capture all of the cons but Fixit will begin to get out of control as his malfunctions start to cause more problems as Ratchet and Danny Clay attempt to repair him only for him to almost destroy the scrapyard before stopping him only for Steeljaw and his pack to break in and take over the Scrapyard only for the Autobots to defeat them and force them out thanks to the mini-cons but the threat Optimus warned them about is much closer than they thought. I think that Optimus should continue training as he prepares to return to earth while Bumblebee's team hold off the exoculating threat caused by Steeljaw and the other cons only for Magatronus to make his return forcing team prime into action once more as he desires to destroy both worlds as Optimus returns to take him down managing to stop the first the Decepticon as he takes him down with Bumblebee's teams help as they then begin the task of capturing the escaped cons as Optimus takes half of Bumblebee's team along with a few of his such as Arcee and Smokescreen to track down the world wide cons who aren't located near crown city as they aim to find out what is going on and then bring down the high council. I think that the High council should be furious that Megatron helped Silverstorm escape from them while on earth there plans are being compromised by Bumblebee and his team's meddling as they require Soundwave to knock some sense into there former lord and remind him of the Decepticon cause as they begin to plot there ultimate takeover of both Earth and Cybertron as Cyclonus knows that there time is now as he hears of Steeljaw taking over Decepticon island a true ally who may help them conquer earth as they prepare to send in the Stunticons to test Bumblebee and make sure he does not interfere with there plans and completely rain them. I think that Steeljaw should make a temporary alliance with Mech after the whole first Decepticon mess as he prepares many options to conquer earth as he allies with the Decepticons on Decepticon island aiming to use them for his own benefit to conquer earth as he gains his first outpost of his new Decepticon empire but he will expand aiming to use Mech to gain a greater hold over earth unlike Megatron who dismissed the humans Steeljaw won't make the same mistake knowing that the human governments maybe threats to his ultimate takeover and to expand his empire only for Bumblebee and Optimus to lead an attack on Decepticon island using stasis bomb aiming to take out all of the cons and take them back to Cybertron and prepare for a graver threat the high council.

Uuummmm... GULP!

Remember, Megatron ordered the Decepticons to disband and went off on his own self-exile, he better not be one of the bad guys, cause that was one of the ONLY unique things about Robots in Disguise.

Another great chapter. Good job.

Great chapter.

This was a short chapter; but I'm happy to hear about the sequel. I bet it will be dramatic and I also can't wait to read about Prime's sister!

This is kinda hard to read.

Arys Nightshade , This is my most viewed and most favorited story, i do not intend to rewrite it. If you do not like it, don't read it. This is a place where fans can come and write and have fun with their ideas and stories. We aren't being graded on how out stories look. You don't have to have everything perfect for readers to love your story. Again, if you don't like a story and it doesn't meet your expectations of standards, then don't read it.