I love Barty so much this was wonderful

Aaaw Barty is so sweet about his Mother, you know, even if he is a psychotic serial killer :') I really don't know how I feel about Barty sr. What am I saying? He's a bureaucratic sycophant. Gross. Go Wanderers!

Oh I really liked this. You can feel Barty's hatred toward his father and the love he has for his mother. Nicely done! Go Wanderers! :)

Hrm, I've never read a story where Barty (Jr) was in it and it didn't immediately make me want to trottle him. Good job on that. I feel bad for Mrs Crouch though.