| Reviews for Long Day |
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   liysyl chapter 1 . 6/5 Cute and Funny twist thanks for sharing. Please ignore previous post I meant to say funny. |
| liysyl chapter 1 . 6/5 Fu |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2019 Ahh! hahaha! How horrible! haha! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2019 uhh i feel like the only p&p thing about this is the names... this could've been a fine fic for fictionpress tbh. i'm glad you didn't continue, would've been way weird |
| Kiwipride chapter 1 . 9/8/2019 Oh no! Awkward! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/19/2019 I'm being honest, the moment I read William met Elizabeth again in New york, I had an inkling that Henry was his father. Gosh there is no way out of it, is there? What Elizabeth and Henry shared was not only one night stand, it was something tangible. He was the reason she came to New York in first place. William on the other hand was not like Canon, he moved to New York not because he fought against his feelings but because he was unsure and doubtful at first. Now they both (Will and Lizzy) have their feelings engaged, but are Lizzy's feelings strong enough to withstand the passion she felt for Henry? Whatever may be the outcome, I loved that you left it open ended. Deep in my thoughts I would like to imagine, that Lizzy/Henry or both (both would be better) shared the truth with William. He deserves to know, something big as this can't be pushed under the carpet. I have no clue or hope for what will happen afterwards. May be someday you will unveil the suspense. Great story. |
| WadeH chapter 1 . 12/17/2018 I just love this one. It's a very distinct idea, not really done before and quite enjoyable. |
| GreenEyes-BlueCoke chapter 1 . 9/25/2018 Oh my gosh. Did that just happen? That was... Hilarious! Can you please write William's reaction? |
| Pumpkin-Scrubs chapter 1 . 9/17/2018 hahahhhahahahhaha. *snorts deliriously* brilliant |
| Another Lizzie chapter 1 . 7/1/2018 AWKWARD! YIKES! |
| NotACursedChild chapter 1 . 3/2/2018 Wow this was... different :-):-):-):-) |
| PineNutPesto chapter 1 . 9/3/2017 Ah, fork. XD |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/26/2017 AGES?! |
| Dennissem3 chapter 1 . 8/26/2017 Great story! I hate it! There is no easy way out... is Elizabeth and William's love strong enough to survive Elizabeth's relationship with Henry? See I don't think a true relationship can exists keeping this kind of secret, therefore it is up to the strength of the love they have for each other to see if it can survive. |
| Arcane Warrior 2012 chapter 1 . 8/17/2017 Good, you stopped, from here on the most plausible path of the story could have only been like the movie, "Damage". |
