Reviews for Paradise Marred
Julie Tulips chapter 1 . 10/27/2016
I keep coming back to this whenever I'm in need of some Alphys Undyne feels. Very well written, I love it.
moss129 chapter 3 . 3/19/2016
Holy shite, this story was a roller coaster of emotions, it was easily one the most saddest stories I ever read but then once the happy moments happened it just made me feel so much at once! Hell I was proud of Alphys along with Undyne! I gotta say I love this one as well! Continue what you're doing!