Great story! Lots of drama and suspense. I liked the ending - more goads please!

nice beginning, with a bit of angst. thanks

I have greatly enjoyed your story. I love that you had whumpnas well as giving Sheppard a hopeful future. . well done

Loved the start loved John compession loved tge pairing

I loved it. I wish there would be more after this one

I just loved your story. Prior to living in Asia for a number of years, I was a fan of SG1. Recently caught some episodes of Atlantis on Comet tv and was hooked. Bought the dvd collection and have been binge watching. Just found this site and am really enjoying these stories. I especially liked this story of yours and look forward to reading more from you.

I agree with the others, this is a great story and i look forward to read more about Teyla John and the the two kids, i like it!

and thank you for writing about Stargate Atlantis so, for me, the series never stoped, because of you and the other writers so
Thank you!

I love this story :-) just the right amount of whumpage paired with an equal amount of romance & family. Looking forward to the next installment

I love this story, and I am looking for the next series(?) of John and Teyla and the two children.

I finally had time to read your story. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing it. I look forward to the sequel.

Hi, I've read all your stories and I'm glad to hear that you have decided to continue with writing sga-stories! :-)
Haike

I think it's a good place to end it, but I'm not adverse to a sequel. It was a great story and I will add it to my favorites, I enjoyed it very much. If you want to write a k or an m for the next story it's okay with me, I just hope you write another.

thank you for your lovely story, I have always thought John and Teyla would make an incredible pairing.
Please write others stories !

Loved it! I was worried Beth would have to go back to her birth mother! I love that John and Teyla were honest with Uremia, and her with them. Hope she keeps her promise to stay quiet about Atlantis! I definitely would love you to continue! While stories have dwindled, there are still us die-hard fans crave new stories! If this was your first SGA story. you did a fantastic job and I will think positive thoughts that you will come back and write some more! Thanks for a great read!

I would be VERY happy to see this go on. Btw, Joe Flanigan knows of fanfiction and the popularity of Sheppard 'thumping' as he calls it! I love the J/T pairing in stories.