You should make a date with a spell-checker.

You are clearly in dire need of it.

This is really good so far can;t wait to see on what happens next.

I had the slim hope of seeing something different than the original ending of Season 1, in fact, it's even worse since another of Lelouch's friend is betraying him...

Thought this might be a male oc fic, but nope, another marysue female oc fic...

Do you hate Nully then if you hate Euphie?

DON'T LET EUPHEMIA DIE
DAMNIT!
Also
Lelouch x Kallen FOREVER!
Motherf !&$

PLEASE KEEP EUPHEMIA ALIVE!
OH! And to add a very shocking twist
Have Suzaku get Euphemia pregnant

Viletta had best have been shot in the head. If not and that whole Shizuka sub-plot goes on I shall be...considerably disappointed.

great chapter please make amy good after all she is a part of nightwing after all

Good work so far. I would have thought that Kimiko would have been more hesitant towards letting an upstart like zero reorganize her Nightwing.

great chapter will amy Weinstein make an appearence

Well Lelouch will find Kallen and her friends what is going to happen, it will be something canon or will change some things.

Lelouch will find Kimiko and will know she enemy britannia, and Lelouch will speak to him and to Kimiko who helped battle of Clovis.

thanks for chapter

I really admire how you're redoing this story. Cause honestly, I stop at chap 24 of Aether after I read part of Lady of Zero. It really show dedication.

history of fanfic is getting better than another at the beginning of fanfic

I have a question Lelouch this body better than before for anything training he continued his training after the war ended?

thanks for chapter

Awesome start! please update soon! Anyways, will Kallen find out about Lelouch being Zero before the Black Rebellion?