This is one of the best stories I've ever read from this random. You did an amazing job. Thank you for posting.

adorableeeeeeeeee!

That was some attractive writing. Oh my heart. I will always come back to this. This is what love is.

Awwwwww. Cute XD

I really love your story, it's very well written. It fits perfectly that you aged them up and that they don't know each other from civilian life. So sweet and fluffy how they get closer.

OMG! THAT WAS PERFECT THAT WAS EXACTLY WAS I WAS LOOKING FOR! BEUTIFUL! GOLDEN! Keep on writing! I love it! You are AWESOME!

I like it, sweet and cute.

OMG this was so freaking amazing! You are an incredible writer! They were so in character i forgot they didn't know each other from school. Man this was great! It was defiantly wroth staying up to 3 am to read!

OMG THIS WAS PURRFECT THANK U SO MUCH 3

This was wonderful :D
Nicely written, hitting me right in my feels, just overall a great job.
Tons of love in me faving this, you deserve it

You, owe. Me. A. New. Heart.
This is incredibly well written, I am impressed with the taunting you give the audience and am further more impressed by your ability to write so damn well. I literally have no critisisms and this flabbergasts me as I am an incredibly judgey person when it comes to writing and here I am writing like a sixth grader. Please keep this level of writing up its superb

THIS NEEDS MORE FAVS. ITS REALLY, REALLY WELL WRITTEN AND UNDERAPPRECIATED. I HOPE TO KEEP SEEING AMAZING CONTENT LIKE THIS.

Oh my, I love this, I would love a sequel to this, but this is soo perfect by itself!

Awesome, totally awesome story. Brilliantly written... Well done.

What an incredible story. Romantic and sweet and told so beautifully. So glad to find there are such skillful writers in this fandom. Hope to read more one-shots like this in the future!