Really enjoyed this story. Hope u continue it

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Fuck this fucking shit ass nigga

why not continue the story its actually getting pretty interesting.

Screw the haters, I love this! Only two suggestions: perhaps give Larry a boyfriend and also make Gideon gay and maybe even get together with Stu Hopps or something.

This is fucking awful. It looks like a third grader filled a notebook with bad ideas before uploading it and calling it a story.

other than the multiple misspellings and typos, i think your doing amazing. i cant wait to see how this ends.

You pretty much describe my thoughts at the end.

This chapter made me smile a bit.

I like how you took initiative there and made a backstory for the cafe. i am not sure what to say about the love interest though.

Seeing as they arent hustling anymore im a bit lost as to why Finnick is treated this way. Maybe im missing something, but i think its overall a good story for Fanfic.

A little odd that it all happens in the station, as dancing like strippers would seem a bit unproffesional, as well as making Chief Bogo openly kiss Clawhauser for all Zootopia to see. a little lacking in thouroughness and detail. but i still like it so far.