Okay now my opinions for the oceverything...itachi brings trans? There was zero hints of that from the start of the story, I mean it’s not canon but it’s your story so whatever goes for you but dropping it so suddenly just seems like it was a last minute decision and usually I don’t think kids think too deeply bout gendersexuality until they are like 12. Itachi finding her out bout being reincarnated would be unlikely tbh since he’s not a yamanka and that’s not how genjutsu work, it only makes the victim sees what the castor wants them to see so it’s limited when it comes to the mind. You seem to be trying too hard in making your character flawed to the point it’s not realistic, like not even giving us anything that makes us think “yes she deserves to graduate early” and with your efforts she seems pretty unrealistic as a person, because of how she handles things emotionally. The only thing that shows that she was affected was one section of a chapter of crying or one nightmare of a dream and you avoided it, in honesty I think it mess her up more... and with sasuke he’s not reacting as he would be expected to, I think while he cares bout his sister’s opinion, I think he would have more negative reactions and opinionhe more conflicted with his sisters reaction and be more distant bout it even after that conversation cuz humans are really complex creatures...I also think itachi sending gifts to both of them is weird, I think the village would react negatively to that, it’s just their reactions aren’t normal and how they easily brush it off.. then in regards to culture, I’m not sure if they would be that open bout their sexuality because while I don’t think ninjas mind much however civilians and clans(specifically towards their heirs)might be a different matter. Also with how much work she’s doing I’m surprised no one mentions how tired she looks or something cuz that’s lot of things n I would be tired... trying to be a business owner, clan economic advisor and ninja is stressful n time consuming on both ends, literally fugaka n itachi was stressed out... itachi from being a ninja and learning to lead the clan, and fugaku was a ninja, father and clan head (who had to deal with old farts that want a puppet), politics are very stressful in honesty. But besides that it’s an interesting story and cool to see someone with the same germ problems as me, though I don’t mind animals as long as they don’t lick my face and I’m able to wash my hands afterwards or touch em with feet, so in that way alone I could relate to her though I wonder why she’d be afraid? Did something in her past life caused that?

Y not wear gloves?

I'm disappointed how much Hana basically shit on Satomi in their fight. If she can put that little fight up she probably shouldn't have graduated yet, "basically a chunin" or not.
But that's my opinion and I'm not the author ;o

"trying to think of a simple red circle was near impossible"
Uh. Um. What? What are you even doing here? Are you just adding whatever defects, failings, and weaknesses you can think of at this point? Is this some attempt to humanize her, avoid Mary Sue stuff, or what?
I'm genuinely confused as to why you think making her that mentally incompetent was necessary.
Or is she just low-self-esteeming herself? I'm fairly possible there is not a single person in existence that cannot picture a simple red circle, provided they know what red and circle are. So is she just underselling herself even in her own thoughts?

. . . That terrified of dogs? animals in general?
This OC is astoundingly pathetic . . . Probably one of the worst possible people to be reincarnated into this world.
How many debilitating phobias can one even have and still survive, let alone function?

I hope someone puts her through therapy of some sort(exposure? probably) to get rid of her unhygienic phobia. Because that is such a debilitating thing for a ninja to have.
Also, her avoidance of changing herself at all, "refuse to be lectured" bullshit annoys meshe admits they're right but basically says "I'm not even going to even try to change because I don't wanna."
Interesting story so far.

So, if she technically assisted Shisui's suicide, why no activated Sharingan?

I got a lot of laughs out of this. Loved Satomi. Feels like she was given too many detrimental issues to try and compensate for her 'genius' but they're minor quirks in the grand scheme.

It always annoys me when a character hides their abilities for no good reason though. Like her unlocked sharingan that we never got to see her use.

srpski jeeej :D:D

I ship Neji with Satomi so much that it hurts, but with the direction you're going with, I'm thinking that Satomi won't end up with anybody at all.

i dont understand the TARDIS part..

I thoroughly enjoyed thislinguistic exploration /especially/ and I do hope one day you continue it! I like the humanity, the flaws you give your characters, and how you write. Thanks for this!

Nooo I love the linguistic world buildingdon't lay off it!

The concept of Itachi bribing Sasori is a hilarious one that I absolutel further exploration in

I have to say that I really love this fic. I love seeing the kiddos getting help for their issues and trauma (because they definitely need it and holy ffff what Shisui did was messed up, poor Satomi). There's just so much character interaction to love here (Neji and Hinata, enough said, but also that little aside moment with Naruto). Itachi sending birthday gifts is super adorable and heartwarming considering that Satomi is cut off from the things she loved in her old world, so those little bits of home are so sweet. You keep surprising me with little twists and turns, so I can't wait to see what you think of next :).