Do the words 'mindlessly cute' mean anything to you? As a compliment, of course. I love the dynamic between these two-and this really sounds like something they'd do. I also appreciate you not making Tsuzuki out to be an idiot, or Hisoka out to be a snot as I rather like both of them. And of course, the heart-melting cuteness helps.

Thank you for writing!

Absolutely adorable! X3 And sincerely sweet. _

Fav! _

~Kaji

That was really good! Tsuzuki's so cute :P Definitely gonna go on my favs list lol n.n;;

That was peaceful and quite contemplative. Good character use and a simple story that that still manages to push the right buttons.

squeel!

That was so sweet! I loved it!

this is just...beautiful

fantastic work! I really enjoyed this!

Great job! _

Wow. This piece is awfully cute. You did a great job of staying true to their characters, and I liked how it all went. The transition from thought-scene-thought was very subtle and smooth, and what more, you've got great spelling and grammar! Hurrah! I like how this is all very simple, but underneath is a very profound underlying meaning to everything. It's so nice. :D

Good job! :)

Oh yes, Tsuzuki -would- drive Hisoka mad within a week. XD But still, that's one of the charms of their relationship, no? ;)

Ahh! It's too sweet!

Great pice, atmospheric with strong and logically developed motivation and psychological development. Very well written, and very sweet. Loved it!

um LOVED it!

How sweet. That was really cute. *dead*

I really enjoyed reading this, it's cute and sweet and just made me go "AW" Thanks for posting it! _