I am a little late...
But absolutely loved this story and the unbreakable connection it showed between Alec and Magnus.

OMG! THAT WAS SO CUTE! (Iread it in a restaurant and I kept squealing and smiling and now my parents think I'm crazy but worth it)

It's sweet! This double meaning of Alec's words has got me too! I'm slow, just like Magnus)) Good story!

Omg that's so cute!

Awws this was super cute

Love it. Write more.

it was soooooooooooooo beautiful pleaaaaase keep going

Wow. Very intense. I really liked reading this. Any chance you'll continue the story?

oml i loved it sooo cute :)

I wanna crawl in a corner and cry, this was so well done!

When someone is speaking you need to put in quotation marks

Otherwise your writing and the story is good

Love it! :D