You did a good job mixing angst with a bit of humor at the end. I loved this

Pear/Banana, huh? Try this: s/10132275/1/Banana-In-the-Crosshairs

Amazing job!

Okay, that last bit had me wheezing! This was a lovely story, I love how you portrayed both The Doctor and Rose.

This was a great fic and I loved reading it. Just FYI: pants in British referred to underpants. You should clarify whether you mean the doctor was wearing under pants or jeans. Thanks for the great story.

Oh my gosh love the ending to this chapter!

Well, she could've popped the other head but I don't think he'd've liked that.

what a beautiful ending. I am really glad that I read this and followed. you have an excellent writing style. I smiled at the end of the story as it was just right. well done!

Do you think there will be a sequel?

I like it! haha I think you nailed jack by the way. super awesome! keep on keeping on.

ah Jack the best friend for allwell done!

Yay! Rosie is back!

I stayed up to binge read this...that's how much I liked it. you got the characters perfect. I can't wait for more. beautiful. keep on keeping on.

Keep going

Well done. This was worth the wait. I am really glad that Jackie slapped him. Ha! It just fits. But I am glad that you let them have a heart to heart. Excellent work on the journal of the Doctor.