Beautiful story, always love to read some yangsty fic's, especially if they are as well written as this one.
Really been surprised that you also included other ships than BB. But it has been a rather pleasant surprise, especially for getting more of May.
Thank you for sharing this story, really made up for an awesome start into the week.

This is an amazing story. I like how you brought other hunters into the mix and kept Yang and Blake together. Keep on writing.

Hailstorm

To be honest I'm more happy that Pyrhha hasn't died

Awesome end to an awesome story, thanks for the epilogue. This was an eminently enjoyable read from start to finish.

This was just amazing oh my babies grew up and had kids

That made my day thank you for that!

You did a great job with this story. Blending your own ideas along with canon, but allowing it to breathe as its own story; was quite the treat. What's next on your list?

That was awesome it sucks ruby lost her leg but im glad adam got the ass whooping he deserved i hope you have another one in ghe making i really want to see what neo has in store.

So, this has been in my read pile for quite some time, and I apologize it has taken me so long to get to it. On the plus side, it meant I got to read it all the way through!

I really did enjoy the ride, it was both fun and angsty in parts. The premise was great, as were the interactions and banter between the characters. Very nice job with Ironwood's effect on Yang.

I also really enjoyed the ships, this was the first I'd ever seen either of the two outlying ones. And though they were almost in the background, that was perfectly fine, the focus of the story was on the Bumblebee pair where it should be.

If I have one critique to make it's that there are a number of typos scattered about, many of them ones that regular spellcheck wouldn't catch. It wasn't enough to make the story any less enjoyable, but it did make me pause at some points to try and decipher what was actually meant by the context. Might be helpful to go back with a fine-toothed comb and clean it up a little just for the sake of polishing.

Overall, I am so very glad I finally got around to this fun read. It was enjoyable from the start right through the climax at the end. Looking forward to when the epilogue comes out!

Love it :3 can't wait for more

Yo so sequel lol

But I loved this my poor rose her leg omg

I liked it. I'm sad that Ruby lost the leg, but I figured that would happen after the detail of the knee injury. Glad Yang's experience was able to help.

Glad with the result of Adam. Side steps the controversy of Yang killing Adam (as dumb as that whole controversy is) while still getting satisfying results. Even better that he's kept alive on "human" kindness. For as long as that lasts.

All in all, good ending. Very satisfying.

Omg Yang is the fricken coolest she whooped dat ass i hope his ass falls off ! Best chapter yet!

Omg this was too much for my heart

Ruby my baby be ok

Em and Merc y'all gotta find better company

Yang holy shit why are you so lit

Well damn that was satisfying