1) Great job with this.
2) I wanna give Sans a hug. What a precious dunkle. I must protect him at all costs.

Excellent writing throughout and some really lovely intimate moments.

a fucking master piece

I just really wanted to say that this story was just amazing! Thank you for letting me and all your other readers enjoy this because it was truly a great story. Thank you author!

Aww man... I decide to go poking through the archives and I find THIS and it... Geez! I teared up at points, I literally gasped out loud at others... It's, really, really rare for a story to make me react this much. Thank you for making this. Really.

reality check through the skull came on in my music playlist during the gaster fight. lol perfect timing.

Whoo boy... Okay. Lots of thoughts here I need to try to turn into words. Here goes nothing... Right. First...Wow. Just wow. This story was one hell of a ride from start to finish. Read it all in one shot. I felt things. It is very hard for me to feel things. Autism plus apathy equals a thick barrier between the conscious mind and emotions. I have to deduce what I am feeling from how my body is reacting. It is often hard. But this...the feelings were almost as clear as they are when I listen to music that resonates with my disconnected emotions. I appreciate this. It's nice to not be numb for a change. So thank you for creating a story that managed to affect me. There aren't enough of those on this site.

Second, OH MY GOD THAT BIT IN THE VOID WHERE GASTER WAS TALKING ABOUT MULTIVERSES AND CREATING WAS AMAZING! You actually touched on a few points that I genuinely believe. Namely, that every work of fiction that exists in our world is a physical reality elsewhere. Those who create those things here are somehow tapping into this without knowing what they are doing. That's what inspiration is. ...It kind of makes what we do as writers all the more incredible when you think about it that way. Our minds are literally touching another reality on some level. Neither end of the connection is truly aware of the other, yet - for a brief moment in time - the contact is real and tangible. And an idea is born. Perhaps, at the other end, someone else is inspired to create a work of fiction based on our reality. Who can really say? But it's a nice thought to think that some how, some way, everything is connected.

Third, I always want to hug Papyrus because he is just the sweetest guy...but I want to hug him even more now. The Great Papyrus indeed! I also want to hug Sans. He needs them. And now I want to hug Gaster too. MUST HUG ALL THE SKELETONS! ...I have my favorites and I feel no shame for this. Also you included a lot of Alphys and just enough Asgore to make me happy. They also need hugs. Also favorites. Yeah, I just want to start hugging all these guys and never stop right now. I told you this story made me feel things.

Fourth, I am seriously regretting never paying attention to Undertale before now. Well, technically this last January. I just...kind of wish I could have been following this story from the beginning as it was being created. Oh well. Better late than never.

Fifth, if you haven't guessed by now I am adding this story to my favorites list. Did that before writing this review in fact. It's not the most coherent review I've ever written but I am really bad at making sense when I feel things. Chances are once I calm down and am able to think again I will come up with something better. So I probably should have waited until I could do a better job of outlining my thoughts. But I didn't and this is the review you are getting even if it's random and weird in places. Sending you mental hugs right now. That is how much I loved this story. Well, that's all I can come up with. Brain is locking up...probably because its three in the morning. Heh...I don't think well when I'm tired either. And I'm starting to ramble so I am going to stop writing and click the button now.

Very beautiful fic which exploits the best theories about Gaster, Sans and Papyrus with a very positive ending !
Thank you so much for this great story !

WOW...
That was awsome. At first I thought it was meh ... but then it turned out great. Neat ending like it that open way.
Keep up your work
IceIce (,)

How in the heck? This was one of the most creative, heartwarming, and well thought out stories I've ever read! Thank you so much!

YOU'RE the one thanking, US? We should be thanking you for this masterful piece of fanfiction! I'm glad I'm not the only one who considers Papyrus nothing more than an overly egotistical side character for Sans, I absolutely LOVE (Not Level Of ViolencE) every single part of this!

This story is almost a year old, but it still packs a punch. I go back and reread it every so often, even though I've read it at least ten times by now. Thank you for putting so much effort into this story.
At the end of this chapter (17), you wrote down that you felt like the fight was lacking. I want to say: This is among the best thought-out, best written fight scenes I've read. That isn't just among fanfiction and "non-professional" (by which I mean only self-published or put online) writing, either. All the effort you put in was well worthwhile.

Someone so needs to draw robot Gaster! I loved your story and I couldn't stop reading until I finished even though I was sick to my stomach the whole day!

I just wanted to let you know I binge read this. It's so good. It's really good. I love how you showed how strong Papyrus really is, a lot of people don't get past the goofiness and don't see that his optimism is a strength! I also loved Gastor's "Control the power, Alter the perception of space, and delete the undesired outcome- or Ctrl Alt delete :D Clever! I loved the bonds between Frisk and the skeleton brothers, between Sans and Pap and Gaster. It just was so moving and so right. How Pap comforted Sans and this mirrored later with Gaster. About accepting, acknowledging, and letting go. Moving on. It's - such deep moving stuff.

I can't even really express how much this story means to me. I've been going through a really hard time myself, a really hard time, since my best friend passed away in June. I guess you can say I've felt like Sans. Apathy towards life, nihilism, tired, so tired, so empty and that there is nothing anyone can do to change or affect life. Keeping the feelings bottled away to myself. . . (why bring others down with me), but, after reading your story I ...I ran to my mom and just cried my heart out about well everything that's been in my head since she died and ... just all the hurt and anger and - it was like crying out the poison. I don't know how to explain it i just- I feel like your story helped me be ready to open up. Or realize that's what i needed. And I feel like I needed to open up...and I just wanted to say - your story just was a ray of hope and light and a rope to grab onto in a really dark and lost time of my life. And I wanted to say thank you. Thank you for writing this.

I started this book at 9:30ish pm. It is now 12:21am. Good night. I will sleep with good fee-WAIT A FUDGING SECOND. THIS MEANS SANS AND PAP ARE BOSS MONSTERS. AAAAAAAAÀAAAAAAAA. fuck. Anyway good morning, today's a school day and 1st period is math. I await a headache. Nighty night.

NYEEEEEEEEHHHHHHH

This made me freaking die. Bcuz instead of reading it like it was some sort of battle cry, I read it as a bbybones crying. Dam it mind.