Each of your stories, while many seemingly are all about love and loss, still have separate, unique morals to them. This one hinges about growing up. Not neccisarily growing fast, as it might sound, but just growing up. It’s incredibly bittersweet but rewarding to see the protagonist learn their hard truths. I’ve certainly learned a lot, too. Now onto Dissonance!

A brilliant story, truly. The writing, the emotions, the FEELS, all conveyed perfectly. Thanks for this great adventure, brother.

Lissa and Frederick and Lucina. Strong reactions.
So it is DLC. Robin, Emm, and Morgan. The amnesia trio. It is not brought up, sadly. I am half against/with Robin/Emm pairing.
Aww. The bloodless bloodbath, which in truth, was just a fun mockbattle.
Ha ha. Father figures. Ass- Awesome.

Wow. Loopdi loops. And John is great and I really hope no tragedy has befallen him. Forgiveness. Such was unexpected.
Is this Robin? Morgan? An OC? Idk, and I’m curious. I didn’t read the summary. Reaching Ylisse is key to cross-out them. Plot is in-ter-rest-ting. I like the other characters, and they seem to go well with the Fire Emblem series.
So I got to mid-point. Not Robin. Grima is now on the table.
Other side of the war. Ah. Feelings And post-war hate.
Ah. Maybe it’s Emmelyn? (Exalt). Emily/Hate for Yllise. An connection/irony. Oh! And blond. Miracle spellliving after a death. DLC has her being in amnesia and I think there was something about her not speaking well? Blow to the head. Desert! Plegian. Does she look Plegian? STAFF. And mid-tier spell. As I write this, I’m becoming convinced. Is Em 20~ or 30~? Thinking it’s late twenties. Anna mentioned a look-a-like. That red-head didn’t believe. Mispronunciation... and strange kindness. The grimleal thingies.
AND IT IS CONFIRMED. I WAS RIGHT.
Risen. Their horror is becoming more real. Is
AH. Chrom and Robin! Exciting. Em really suffers. She needs happiness

Yep that was a good read! I really enjoyed your character work here and i literally gasped (in public) when jer reappeared in the story

So I just left a review on "Into the Outrealms" the other day, and figured it would be good form to come and leave a review here too (since so many people put so much stock into how many reviews a story has).
This story was the first story of yours that I read. I came to it through the reccomendations page on TV Tropes (which is kind of like covering your eyes and playing darts) and was very happy I took the plunge. Of the three parts of your Dissonance trilogy I think this is the strongest standalone piece because of the focus it has on one character and her struggles. For the record I think Dissonance itself is the weakest of the three, which I chalk up to it being technically written first and some stylistic twists that can be jarring for first-time readers, and I think Outrealms has equal writing quality with Miracle, but requires greater investment and effort on the reader's part to truly enjoy due to the greatly expanded cast, bt I digress. I could repeat a lot of what I said on my other review here, but I'll try to say something new instead.
One of my favorite things you did with Emm's character was giving her this insatiable curiosity that continues to override her fears and anxieties of what she doesn't yet know. There's just something satisfying about the sheer reverence you see and hear in the word "adventure," whenever she's about to plunge into something new.
Also, good job giving Emm character flaws. Emmeryn is a bit of a Mary Sue herself as she's presented in the game before she lobs herself off of a cliff, but you've managed to avoid making Emm too good for this world. Just adding "a bit selfish" as a trait does wonders for the believability and likability of a character, and you've done far more with her than just that.
There's a lot more I could rave about, but your story really does speak for itself. Happy writing, and keep up the awesome work~

So, I started reading this not really expecting much but god damn, was this fic amazing. It was so sweet yet heart wrenching and I honestly don't even have the words to describe how much I appreciated it. It just makes me feel warm and fuzzy. This might just be one of my favourite fe fics, in fact, if not the most memorable at least.

This story is fucking incredible.
I wish this was canon, it's that good. Yup, that's about it.

Oh, wait! I read this thing in one sitting (like you're supposed to), but it took quite a while. That's because, and hear me out on this, oneshots shouldn't be 84,000 words long! You could've turned this into a fucking average-sized novel, and you said it was written with the intent to be a oneshot?

I have been binge reading this since my reluctance to read Dissonance. I do not regret it one bit. This is absolutely beautiful writing and I can feel all the effort you have placed in this. I have come to love Emmeryn even more and I would suggest this story even to those who do not know Fire Emblem. It truly is a gem. I was literally gripping my phone, shaking with emotion, every time Emm has something happen to her. Seeing her growth, her healing, her journey, makes me feel like a proud parent. I love your characters, I love John and Jer and oh goodness, I cannot express how much your writinf tugs at my heartstrings. I know I said Morgan may be my favorite of what you have written, but I find myself bumping it down to the number 2 slot. This was gorgeous . Beautiful. This would be a movie I would watch. Amazing. Thank you. Thank you for sharing this to the world.

Another thing I forgot to mention in my previous reviews: I think you did a great job of conveying her speech impediment as Emily. How when she gets nervous or doesn't concentrate its harder. Now I've never had amnesia and forgotten how to speak, but I did move to a new country without knowledge of the language. It's been a good while now and I get told I speak quite fluently, but it still happens that if I get too worked up or emotional or if too many people are around distracting me that I can't get my thoughts out nearly as well. It still takes a very conscious effort to speak properly. I loved how you described that with Emily. It was very relatable and above all very realistic. Great job!

That was so mature and beautiful how she didn't reveal her identity T.T And how she put off getting in a relationship until she found herself. And Frederick dear god. And the graves and UGHHH THIS STORY! This story was without a doubt one of the best fanfics I've readever. Hands down. And without a doubt best Emmeryn fic. You are a truly talented writer. I hope you never give it up.

Aww I'm so happy she's back where she belongs. To be honest, I would've maybe preferred it a biiiiit more if the marriages and Robin had been left ambiguous (makes me more easy to imagine it canon), but I did very much like the way you drew the comparison between Robin's sacrifice and Emmeryn's. Even if I normally don't prefer it, I can see that naming specifics here was clearly necessary.

I'm just laying in my bed silently sobbing knowing how close she was to the Ylissean fleet, her family T.T So close and yet so far I really should be writing for my own story right now but I'm so engulfed in this I can't stop XD

"It was only a matter of time before it all crumbled" I really had to put my phone down and mentally prepare myself. I love John, and I love Jer and all the workers. The moment where she finally said Father almost had me in tears. I need to gather my bearings. Christ this story is so emotional. I'm seeing Emmeryn in a whole different light now. And I'll never be able to play the Valm Harbor chapter again without wanting to run off the screen and save John. This story is truly gold, and I'm not even finished yet!

So that LK is a dick, huh? I like the falling parallel here. I had a question though: Emmeryn's Brand was right in plain sight on her forehead... Wouldn't *someone* recognize it? Loving the story so far!