Mah mamma mia! I really don't know which version I like most, the older one was on my top 5 list but this rewrite is just as promising!

And now comes the time for great and life-changing revelations, which is pretty much the norm for Holy Grail Wars.

Assuming that Dark Sakura isn't about to ballistic with Shirou being mortally wounded. Either way, we must heat Saber close to Shirou so he can use Avalon.

Avalon!

Archer finally rebel againts his master. I thought he wouldn't do that since he already see that Shirou in this timeline are different from the original Shirou. I still didn't understand why'd he shoot Shirou though. Is it because he wanted to kill Sakura?

Anyway, good chapter! I hope inspirations and ideas keeps flowing to you as usual! Thank you for uploading this chapter. Keep up the good work!

Interesting...

Whaaat? That... would be one way to end the chapter I guess... Wow, I did not expect that to happen. I normally don't mind cliffhangers, but this one is pretty huge. I wonder if Shirou will survive it, because a warrior of Archer's caliber shoould be able to kill unarmoured human pretty much instantly. The fact that he managed to grunt makes me think that Archer spared him on purpose. Which makes no sense whatsoever. Hmm... I guess I will see what happens when I get to read the next chapter.

There've been a lot of drama in the last few chapters. Some good (Rin and Artoria interactions), some bad (everything involving Sakura). Overall, amazing as usual.

Wow what a twist! How's Shirou gonna come back from that?

Lovely chapter. Archer repeatedly going after Rin was hilarious

Oh my god! The story focusing on Yuri smut has no right to have this good of a side story as well.

Conversation with Sakura was very weird and unsettling, loved it. I almost thought everything would proceed exactly like in Heaven's Feel for some time, but then Archer just stabs Shirou, awesome. Well, that was his goal all along I guess. As to why didn't he do it sooner, my guess is that he wanted to know why is this version of 5th Fuyuki war different. It's amazing how you always remember, that by changing one thing you would also change many others, now I really wonder what will happen next

Well that's gonna leave a stain on the floor. Poor Shiro, he never can catch a break can he?

Ohhhhhh my goodness! How could you end this chapter like that! Oh my goodness nooooooo please tell me the next chapter will be release in like...5min? That’s a joke right? A prank? Eurg...CAN’T WAIT to see what’s next, you’re the absolute best!

Sakura confuses the shit out of me most of the time, finish your damn sentences, girl! No incest sex, shame... I mean, oh no! Shirou!

Okay, I'm already thinking that Archer was standing outside of the bathroom until they finished their little... heated moments...? err, anyways, I'm looking forward to see why does Sakura asked Rin and Saber to see her, soo, keep up the good work, and stay safe! I hope inspirations and ideas keep coming to you! Have a good day!

Archer definitely heard them. No way he didn't.

This is one of the best chapters yet. Not just because of this most wonderful love scene, but because Saber is being the forward one for once. To voice her desire for Rin, to service and savor her, to make the effort to reach out... for the King who always has had walls around herself, the one who 'does not understand humans'... it is a moment filled with a world of meaning.