All your effort on that fight scene was not wasted-it was one of the best written scenes EVER! You know, if you ever write a book (not fanfiction) please put a notice up here for everyone because I would love to read it. Anyway I want to get back to your captivating story now...;)

So I've been reading your story and I was so engrossed that I kept forgetting to review but here I am to say that I am COMPLETELY SMITTEN! This gorgeous masterpiece has captured my heart entirely. I can't believe English is not your first language! This is brilliant! I hope you'll be writing other stories as well.

Holy cow... I don't even know what to say but I desperately wanted to review. You have just given me the wildest roller-coaster ride a fanfiction has ever given me. This story has kept me up well into the night because it swept me away I needed to know what happened next. This story has made me laugh, it has made me almost cry (I don't cry while reading so kudos) it has made me lose my freaking mind over and over again and has left me shook to my core. Reading this has been an insane experience and I love this story with all my heart. I have no idea what's coming but I eagerly await it.

amazing! great to see such depth in agravaine

WOWWWW

Wow! Great start, especially considering English isn't your first language!

I loved everything about this story! The pacing and the suspense was good! The character development was gold!
It was great! Please keep writing!
Although I did feel the end was kind of out of nowhere, and Gaius felt out of character going behind their backs like that. And that girl that came out of nowhere and suddenly seems to have to marry Arthur for some destiny seemed like a bit of a stretch.
However thats just my opinion before that everything was so good. Morgana already being dead for some reason and this girl appearing out of nowhere with the sword in the stone made me suspect she either killed Morgana, which makes sense or is Morgana somehow. The way you wrote Morgana makes me think she has something planned, especially since she died with a smirk on her face and since she was tampering with the book Morgause told her not to mess with.
I like how everything was planned from the beginning, Morgana's death, the way the characters developed made sense. I love how Gwen was angry at Arthur and did not forgive him right away. It was carried out well. I wonder if she turned to the dark side after being captured by Morgana in someway.
Anyway please keep writing, You are a great writer! This is one of the best Merlin fanfics I've read.

Merlin is crying and has just been promoted and his first question is 'Can I wear a cape?' XD Perfect

I knew it!

What a complex story! It’s the same Destiny for Arthur and Albion but written differently. So hard on so many. What of Arthur and Guinevere? And what will this do, or has it done already to Gaius, his heart sworn to heal and not to harm? And was it,then, the gods who overrode Merlin’s enchantment on the sword in the stone?
I’m still wondering how Morgana died and how Gwen is faring. So many questions! It’s good to see you here again. Excited for the next chapter!

Can I strangle Gaius? Is it even moral to wish that? How can he do that to Arthur? But at some level i do understand why he had to do it, does not mean i have to like it. Poor Arthur, i feel so bad for him, he sacrificed so much for Albion but still its not enough. Your storyline is so complex and well written that one feels every emotion the characters feel. About Maryyn, to be honest i thought she is some magic manifestation of Morgana thats why she was able to get the sword out so the prophecy was a right twist. Eager to see where you take it further. At the moment, I don't like her though simply because she can be a hurdle for Arthur and Gwen. But i am sure you will change my opinion of her. lastly, thank you for coming back to this story and doing a great job at it. Stay safe.

Awesome update.

Holy shit. The vial. Did not see that coming. Damn.

Whoa, man, whoaaaaaaaaaa!

Begging your pardon, ma'am, but where the FUCK IS THE ENDING?!