bugger, i really need to pre-check number of chapters before reading. I'm going to be really optasmistic and hope you haven't abandoned this story simiply because four chapters over 2 years tells me you don't update regulariily and Pokemon stories are one of the hardest/longest ones to write well.

hope your a-levels went well and you are succeeding in what ever you have choicen to do with your life.
:P

Update soon...

Amazing story, I definitely like Ash getting gible and larvitar as starters ,as Garchomp is my favourite Pokémon and Tyranitar is a all round bad ass, will he catch a horsea maybe as this will give him a powerful water type

Yep Gary has influenced Ash way too much now he is a ass to the people who loved him, simply because the mother didn't told him something, Ash is more immature than I thought.

Never understand why people let themselves get bullied by idiots especially on their same age, heck if he still gonna get beat up may as well go down taking Gary balls or eyes with him, you know a kick in the groin or a punch in the eye gonna cause a lot of pain for an asshole

This story is awesome!

This is a fantastic read well done

make another plz

please update your story is awesome so far

Lmao keep tbis going ita great i love it

Please update

Please update

Really good story, really want to see people’s reactions to his Pokémon so please update this again soon.

Great story please make more chapters

Please update