Wow I really liked the concept behind this story. Because its true when you give up you wither away and the mind plays such a large role in our physical health. Really good story I really enjoyed it.

Loved every second of reading this story. The fact that Sesshomaru didn't dwell on the fact that she is human and just accept what he felt made this ten times better.

I really enjoyed seeing how lovely their relationship is. I'm glad she got some closure with Inuyasha, though I am still unclear as to what he was doing/trying to do in his relationship with her. And i still don't quite understand what motivated the others to deny her requests for help. This was an interesting little story.

It isn't unreasonable that Sesshoumaru might start to look at her differently and develop feelings for her after taking care of her so intimately right from the start.

I'm surprised Miroku didn't ask Sesshoumaru what Kagome's journal said. I am very curious as to why Miroku, Sango, and Kaede would not teach her as she asked. Nice way for Sesshoumaru to get a small glimpse of her world.

So very sad. Kagome gives up her time and her family to come and make a life with Inuyasha in his time and it's like there's a conspiracy to force her to stay exactly the same instead of growing and learning to find her own place there.

I really liked how Sesshoumaru cared for Kagome
the way he nursed her back to health

well done!

I'm always sad to see stories where Inuyasha is such an ass, because I want to like him, and these just point out all the reasons I shouldn't. Lucky for me, the stories almost always come with a consolation prize, one that's even better than what you lost. Looking at you Sesshoumaru! The nice quality of writing is a plus, especially since I can really see this happing. Thank you for the story!

Love it. Short, simple and very insightful. Love the twists and the ending :)

I loved it! It's so cute and well written. I hope you continue to make such great pieces like this!

Kind of want to see the kids they will have

ahhhhh does this have a sequel it is just too good! I love it!

Chi! The rat got what he deserved! Nice job. I really enjoyed your tale and thank you for a great read!

Awesome! ;]

Really love this story
Can't wait for the next chapter and more