This is in response to your poll on your profile page. Personally, I thought that your writing was spot on and that there were few, if any problems with it. I think that you should continue writing your stories as you did in the past. That said, I am chomping my fingernails to the bone waiting in anticipation for Chris to finally get his just desserts. I have been following this story since March of 2017 and will be continuing to do so to the very end. Please update as soon as possible. Thank you.

This is a great story I don't know why I didn't read this earlier but do keep up the awesome work here :3

Sorry that it has been a while since I reviewed. Anyway, it's good to know that Geoff moved on from Bridgette and is at least happy that she has a happy life. As for Duncan, I am glad that Courtney was able to give Duncan some great input on what he can do for his life. Finally, to live up to my username, here are a couple of great ideas you could use (if you want to that is). Since Scarlett has shown to be "temperamental" to say the least, Noah will have to regain control of the group to show he is in charge. My idea is that Noah should Order Scarlett on to interact at all with Gwen. To make sure of that, he should bring in Eva to act as someone to personally supervise Scarlett at all times to keep her in line ( maybe give her a taser and/or gun just in case). Of course, Scarlett would object, but Noah can threaten her that if she screws up again, not only will she get kicked out of the group and lose the chance to get revenge on Chris, but may even be killed for good measure. One more idea is maybe Chef could be involved in the final heist. He seems to be fed up with Chris and deserves a happy ending. Off topic, did you hear that there will be no more actual seasons of Total Drama. Instead, we get Total Dramarama and while some episodes are okay, most episodes are not. What are your thoughts on the show.

Bridgette married with a kid? Too bad Geoff. That has to hurt.

Sorry about not reviewing sooner. First off, I was checking to see if Appaluze had reviewed because he always gives insightful reviews and some hints on what to expect for the future when I saw the most recent review from Codammy Forever. Whoa, I have never seen anyone overreact to some criticism like that. I am sorry about that, but don't let it get to you. People like that are no reason to get discouraged in your stories and whatnot. Moving on, I have to say that I knew deep down that Bridgette would have moved on at this point and have a family. I am also glad that Geoff decided to move on and not interfere with her life. He may not be the sharpest knife of the bunch, but at least now he is looking towards the future. As for Duncan, it looks like he maybe having some ideas to be a mechanic after the heists are over. And he got the idea and encouragement from Courtney off all people. This was a great chapter and less than six weeks since the last one. So there may be only eight or nine chapters left at least for this story. Since last chapter talked about Gwen and Scarlett and this one was about Geoff and Duncan, that leaves Cody and Noah for the next chapter before the big heist goes down. For some reason I have some ominous feeling that the next chapter Noah is going to cross some certain line in which there may be no going back. That "visit to his cousin Dave" may be some plot to have Scarlett "taken care of". I mean it's obvious that he is not going to sit back and let Scarlett have any more chances to hurt anyone else. Of course, he does not know that Scarlett is seeking more help with her anger. Then again, Noah does not seem to be the type of person that will let anyone threaten someone he cares about get away with it. If that is indeed the case, it could affect his growing relationship with Gwen as she may not want anyone to die because of her. Whatever happens next, I cannot wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.

YOU KNOW WHAT? FINE HAVE IT YOUR WAY. I AM JUST TRYING TO GIVE YOU A FEW IDEAS AND YOU GIVE ME THIS SHIT. GO DO YOUR STORY YOUR WAY. DON'T SAY THAT I DIDN'T GIVE YOU ANY BETTER IDEAS TO BETTER YOUR STORY BECAUSE THAT WOULD BE A LIE. IN FACT, I WILL DO THE CODAMMY STORIES AND THEY WILL BE A HELL OF A LOT BETTER THAN YOUR SHIT STORIES AS WELL AS APPULUZE OR WHATEVER. IN CONCLUSION, YOU BOTH CAN GO FUCK YOURSELVES AND I AM DONE WITH READING YOUR STORY AND ANY MORE OF THEM. THEN AGAIN, YOU PROBABLY DON"T EVEN CARE. TO REITERATE, GO FUCK YOURSELEVES BECAUSE YOU LOST A GOOD FOLLOWER.

Oh I'm glad to offer thorough reviews and support toward you at any time! If I can only remember to leave a review immediately after you post the chapter and we'll be good. xP

Hopefully so since I do think that we can finish it this year, unless, as you said, life throws both of us a major curveball. It depends on how many more chapters the story has and all that we want to happen and all that jazz.

With that being out of the way, I can finally do a commentary of the chapter at hand.

I'm happy that Geoff finally accepted Bridgette being married and being happy and that he was okay with letting her go. I know that it must be hard for the poor dude, but I'm sure he'll find someone else out there for him (and between you and me, there's been a theory a lot of the fandom supports which claims that Geoff is bisexual and has had a relationship with Brody, but no one from the offical TD camp has confirmed that so that could be something we could explore, if it ever comes up in our conversations). I have a feeling that the next time Bridgette and Geoff interact with each other, Geoff's going to surprise Bridgette as to how much he's changed and show that he was the one who made the mistakes and that while he has to live with the consequences, he's at peace now.

Ah yes! We get to see Duncney interact once again. I should've known that Courtney would've told Duncan off and point out that she knew all along that things would end badly for him, but I'm glad that she softened up a little when he told her what his future plans were. I actually loved seeing them briefly catch up and to have a moment of sorts. It makes me go, daww. c:

I'm ready for the next chapter to lead us to further adventures. I wonder where the moral compass will take our gang of merry thieves at this time.

-Josh

Dang, I wish there was more to read! This was just so good! I never got bored, and can't wait for more. All the characters are extremely interesting. Good job guys, and keep up the fantastic work!

Nice little focus chapter on Geoff and Duncan about how they want to improve themselves, although I was disappointed that we didn't get to have a talk between Geoff and Bridgette to at least have them leave on good terms. Duncan on the other hand even if he won't admit it got the lecture from Courtney that he needed in order to think about how to improve his future once the whole heists stuff is over and done with, he could become a mechanic as shown during the heist challenge on Action he could repair a go kart pretty well as well as make his own motorbike during the bike challenge on Island.

I want to take a moment and say that I can't believe we've made it to the three year mark on here. This is now the longest story I've ever worked on with a person and I'm glad that it's with you since you've been an amazing co-author. I can't wait to see where the story will go this year. c:

And thank you guys for 90 reviews! I can't believe how close we are to 100 reviews. After this, we will be just nine away. I also want to say that the next chapter might be a bit delayed since Warrior is busy with his job and I'm busy with a full semester of college. I promise you guys that the next chapter will come out at some point in the next few months. I also have to work on the final chapter of AG, but I'll explain more on that later.

I love reading all of these different theories and guesses you guys have on what might happen next. It makes it exciting to see who can accurately guess what will happen next. I hope you guys have enjoyed this chapter since it's probably my favorite one I've written to date.

Wait a minute, you might ask. What about my thoughts on the chapter? I've not been positing those since I've been telling Warrior my thoughts through our messages, but I promise to do them again for you guys starting next chapter. Until then! :D

-Josh

I was happy to see your new chapter and I am glad that Gwen is finally found some happiness in her life and that she finally got some revenge on Chris. I cannot wait to see how the final heist is going to go. Also, I am glad that Scarlett is realizing what her temper is costing her. When even Cody is upset with her, then she really knows that she screwed up. It may be too late for her even if she does get some serious professional help. Personally, I feel that Cody deserves someone better. His reasons for not pursuing her were spot on. Anyway, I am glad that you revealed that Izzy wasn't dead. It would be something for her to do to get the cops off her back. Just a few questions. How many chapters do you think we have left before you are done? Are we at least halfway done or more? Is Sammy going to have a big role in later chapters? Finally, is there going to be some profound reason why Noah would go to all this to get revenge on Chris? Anyway, keep up the good work.

Well, it has been a long time since I have reviewed. I got to say that I am glad that Gwen did not go into a downward spiral again, especially after that violent altercation with Scarlett. In fact, from what I have read, she seems prepared to dish back the same treatment. Whatever she actually will and how much remains to be seen. I am glad that she is feeling much happier, especially after all that has happened. Scarlett, on the other hand seems to be finally realizing that her anger has consequences and is at least taking the effort to get help. Whatever or not it sticks or does any real good is up in the air. Anyway, the chapter aside I wanted to run some ideas with you and Lowand. Appulauze, I know that you usually pair Cody and Scarlett together with the exception of Anything Goes (still waiting for the next chapter) with Cody and Heather together, it may be time to pair Cody with another girl, like Sammy. Cody said it himself that he was worried that Scarlett would get violent with him and possibly any kids they would have. He needs someone more stable in mind like Sammy. If he somehow met her, then that leaves some more potiential plots to be explored and Sammy could use some more happiness in her life as well. I am not saying this just purely to see another Codammy pairing in another story, but just to tell you that by going in uncharted territory and getting out of your comfort zone can help you grow as a writer and leaves the door open to new ideas. J.K. Rowling wrote some adult novels after her time writing Harry Potter, Stephen King writing Sci-fi like 11/22/63, even best-selling author James Patterson wrote some children's books recently. If it worked for them, then it certainly can work for you. In any case, it never hurts to take some risks. For Lowland, I am glad you updated because I was seriously getting worried that you were going to take another 14 month hiatus. But, that is not the case now and I cannot wait to see exactly how the group will rip off Chris (again). I am disappointed that I still did not see Chris' reaction to his restolen art, but I am going to follow this story to the end. Moving on, I noticed that Sammy has the same profession and last name as to your story Sis Can you spare your liver. If this story and this current one is in the same universe then there is something I would like to run by with you. I was disappointed that Amy did not really apologize to Sammy for all the crap she did all their lives or made some kind of amends. I at the least felt that her parents could have put some pressure on her to at least do that but they were putting pressure on Sammy to help Amy. True, the serious fighting and taunting did stop, but that's not really the same thing as making things right. I also figured Jasmine could have been brought on board to put the fear of God in Amy. However, (assuming that this story takes place in the same said universe as your other story), maybe Scarlett can "straighten" Amy's attitude out for Sammy's sake. But that's just me, anyway, looking forward to the next chapter.

So Sammy became a therapist huh? Wonder what happened to Amy? Although to be honest she is the character from Pahkitew Island I liked the least. Even more so then Sugar.

Well, today is your stories third anniversary and I just wanted to give you a big shoutout for it. I also hope that a new chapter is not long and I am looking forward to reading it and the reaction on what Chris's response will be in discovering his art is gone.

Hello, I just wanted to know if everything is alright. It has been almost four months since you updated this story and I just wanted to know when we are finally going to see Chris get knock off his high horse. I know that your three year anniversary for this story is coming up on Monday and I am hoping to read the part where Chris is angry and sad for his stolen art being stolen. I also wanted to know what Noah and the group are going to do with Scarlett. It's obvious that she has to be dealt with as she is too unstable and violent. One good idea is that in between this time and the final heist, Noah should confront Scarlett about this incident and demand that she give Gwen an apology. if no, Noah can show he means business by threading to either exclude her from the group or put her in the ground. Of course, she would be too proud and refuse. Noah would go forward with his threat and say she is out of the group. Scarlett could threaten to expose the group to the police or Chris. Then Noah could counter that as they would sell her out in a heartbeat. Then again, another reviewer mentioned that the reason that Scarlett took that one painting is to use it as leverage with the Polish government to negotiate with Canada to erase her record and avoid more legal trouble in exchange for the painting. Scarlett could use this to try and intimidate Noah or mention that if they try to kill her, then recordings that she made of the previous heists and the recent heist will be revealed to the public. Maybe Noah will finally put his foot down and tell her that even if those recordings are true, they will deal with that if and when that happens as they have an escape plan and even if the law can't get Scarlett then Chris will and he might make her disappear forever for stealing his art. One reviewer mentioned that Noah should have Cody kill Scarlett when the time comes or piss her off enough to warrant killing her. That may not be a bad idea as Scarlett would never see it coming. Or better yet, maybe Cody could badmouth Scarlett enough to distract her enough for one of the others like either Noah or Duncan to kill her and dump her body somewhere. Anyway, I hope to see another chapter before the month is over.