That was absolutely beautiful. I loved the ending (the very end nearly made me cry because of how it spoke to me). Wonderful job.

That was so flippin cute. Honestly, it was a LOT to read through, but I liked it. Thank you.

you know... this makes me think of an idea.
If were talking about parallel universes and such why dont you make a fic about Ladybug and Chatnoir going to a parallel universe where their opposite selves have feelings for the other? Ladybug is madly in love with Chat noir but chat declines. and Adrien loves Marinette, but Marineete is too focused on Chat to see. and maybe a long the way, the original Chat noir and Ladybug relalize the others feelings for them and come to accept them. You dont have to do it but youve got me thinking about parallel universes, and i can't stop coming up with all sorts of interesting possibilities! :D Also this story is very intriguing, I really like how long the chapters are, and you go at a much slower and well detailed pace then many other fanfics iv'e read. Keep it up your doing great!

I just... you just... wow... this was a pretty nice story. Thank you very much

It was interesting to see Chloe in this chapter, you did end up showing us that she does have the potential to change, especially because in your story, she has people around her who are not afraid to tell her that her actions are wrong. It makes her more self-aware when people arne't indulging her. I gotta say, I was surprised at the hints of Nathanael/Chloe! Apart from the fact that I wasn't expecting it, I'm not sure how I feel about it. Maybe I'd be more inclined if you fleshed them out because, although I don't usually like the idea of a bully and a past victim becoming intimate, they might actually work.

But they're not what I want to talk about. THIS CHAPTER WAS ADORABLE I LOVE THIS END. It was interesting to see Adrien agreeing with Alya's theory. And I love that he shut Chloe down instantly. Thank you so much, if only Adrien was less passive and had the guts to do that in canon. Marinette getting a haircut is really...neat because it kinda goes back to the beginning when she was combing her long hair. Adrien and Marinette pretending not to know each other (which they failed at in my opinion, they failed the second Adrien blurted out that she was beautiful) was funny and cute. I'm really glad that it all worked out for Adrien and that him and Marinette will be seeing so much of each other now. This ending was really sweet.

Oh so it wasn't just the line that was inspired by that piece of writing but the whole fic, that's so neat. I'm definitely looking forward to the oneshot! I would also really like to mention the mythology in this story, you put a lot of thought into it and it was interesting to see how things worked in the world you created. And congratulations on finishing your first multi-chapter story! You worked hard on this. I hope you're proud of it.

This is tough to answer. My favourite chapter would have to be chapter 3, but my favourite scene would probably be this ending scene, but I also really liked them being cute and flirty while running around Paris as their superhero selves.

Ladrien definitely is the true sin ship, the both of them get to indulge in each other. It's just so easy because everything's reciprocated, and even encouraged. There's no barriers. Although it works differently in this story because they're head over heels for each other, no matter what forms they're in :') I'm glad you indulged yourself and wrote this chapter that, like you said, is pure romance. This chapter was cute. I love that Adrien is the one with Marinette's schedule in your story, it's a nice role reversal. I really did get the whole 'young and free and high on love' feeling from them. They even had me grinning for them.

I thought the combing scene was interesting, and the story behind the comb too, so it's neat that it was inspired by an actual cultural custom. It's cute that Marinette is using her parents' relationship to guide her own, she even stole their pet name for each other. Love of my life...it's more special when you consider how very true and fitting is for them. Through many universes, they're still each other's long-standing love through the many lives they've lived.

This fic ended before I could catch up, which is totally my fault so let's see if I can get through it. This was a really interesting chapter! I like how it opened with a flashback, the whole multi-universe concept has only really been told from Chat's point of view so it was interesting for us and Marinette to get a glimpse of their past lives. The whole past life thing also makes me think of Avatar, the cartoon, because it's like their past lives are still with them and influencing their actions (like when Ladybug was catching the akuma) which I like! I also really found it cool how The Evillustrator worked, in terms of him wanting to live out his fantasy. And I'm so glad Marinette called him out on it, and even felt bad for blaming Chloe (although I don't blame her, Chloe has earned a bad reputation).

Also I'd just like to say that a majority of this chapter was action but you managed to stick in a chunk of romance! Which I'm thankful for because it was all so well-placed. The way Chat was so grateful to be saved, and his reaction to seeing her as Ladybug, and even before that, Marinette wanting nothing more than to save Chat because putting aside that he's the city's protector, he's become such an important part of her life that she can't lose. And I love the way they instantly fell into a pattern when it came to combat! Adrien kept throwing out cheesy lines though, I love it and it's so perfectly him. Also there was that one line in this (about letting him love her) and I'm pretty sure I know where I read something similar. I wonder if that was an intentional reference. Anyway, the end was adorable.

AAAAAAAAAH...! I almost can't believe that it's over! My heart practically melted into a pile of happiness... ; v ; And I really enjoyed reading Nathanael's redemption since I can't imagine him not doing so. Chloe was interesting too because there have been moments (however minuscule) in canon where there seems to be more to her. And Tikki and Plagg... I really hope to see them interact soon in canon and it'd be nice if they're as cute together as the bit at the end in this story. :') Nicely done and thank you so much for taking the time to write this lovely piece of work! ;D

P. S. The first chapter is honestly my favorite: it really pulled me into this AU and Marinette's interactions with Adrien made me go "d'aww" aloud, which is something that doesn't happen usually. *lol*

Oh my Ladybug, this story is in my top five, it's absolutely amazing and so well writen and beautifully thought out and the concept is just the coolest! Thank you for writing this, it was simply miraculous
Much Love!
-Fang

*falls to knees... floored* Wow. What a story. I'm crying and smiling at the same time which is a feat not many authors can make happen. The emotion here is so... real. Tangible. Added to favorites for future re-reads.

Awwww. Beautiful, what a wonderful story.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

The epic sweetness in this is going to give me cavities, and I don't care. I loved this, thank you so much for writing it.

Great story!

Awww... love it!

Kyaaa~ Finally.