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wow I LOVE THIS STORY! I don't think ive read a better koga and kagome story ever please write some more like this!

I really enjoyed how you wrote this entire thing around one plot point/concept. I also enjoyed a great number of snarky likes throughout the piece. Your Kagome has quite the mouth on her and plenty to vent.

The whole story written around a concept. I like it. Thanks!

Lol! This was so good! Thanks for shairing! :)

That was a fun read! I especially liked the part at the end where Kagome wonders about possible changes. Really neat concept. Really glad I read it :) thanks for writing and posting it!

Woot! Well said!

That was so great! Best line ever, "shut the fuck up i'm trying not to puke on you" LOL. great, great chapter! lots of action!

heehee, cool. Although the fact that it's a year later threw me off a bit. l really liked what midoriko said about the jewel and the pieces. But omg if her scent changed how will Kouga react to that? I totally see Kouga have a little girl, awwwwww!

uh Oh! What's happening? Will the change affect the pup? Is she going to be half miko, half demon? that would be kind of neat, lol. I like how Sesshy calls her the Eastern Lady :)

Really love this story just wish this whole mating thing was a little more clear as the details seem to change. Also, don't we think Kagome should be in love with Kouga already BEFORE she accepts his mated mark? I can see their relationship developing but nothing of love yet so I'm really surprised she took his mark so soon especially since she hasn't found her friends or family yet. Just seemed a little rushed and out of pace with the story. Otherwise, this has been a very fun, great read!

haha omg I can't believe that just happened! lol awesome.

i love all the great cultural info you include about demons and wolf demons, especially addressing how long they live! Really liked the part where Kouga and the pack had to stop everything to go looking for the missing cub and how he brings her back. so sweet.

Wow. I was hesitant to read this at first not really interested in stories where Kagome goes through "changes" but i kept circling back and finally dove in! By the very first chapter I was blown away by your professional and artistic writing style. As I kept reading I was intrigued by your detail, your sentence structure, bits of humor, exceptional dialogue, all of it. Then I read this chapter and it all came together for me! Just wow! I'm soooooooooooooooooooooo glad I stopped to read this! I have no idea where it's going and I don't care anymore because you write Kouga and Kagome so freaken well and I feel like I'm THERE in the story your detail and description is so wonderful! Just wanted to say THANK-YOU for posting this! Am really enjoying this and am gonna try and read it slowly so I don't go through it too fast, lol. Well done!

A very good ready just like your other stories, it just jumped around a bit. Either way I loved it.