Reviews for How to Win a Tsundere's Heart
NoxScribe chapter 9 . 9/5/2019
I guess I'm a little late to the party, but I just started reading this fanfic and I absolutely love it! I just finished chapter nine, and so far it's been amazing! I really like your writing style, and the interactions between the characters are amazingly written.
The tsunderes are really in character where they find it difficult to/ don't want to express their true emotions, not being totally emotionless, and they're trying to protect themselves from being hurt. It absolutely broke my heart when Arthur thought "that's what they all say," when Alfred said he wouldn't leave.
And the tsundere captors are amazing, very funny and creative, gotta love them.
I really like how you've put cardverse and soulmate AUs in a high school AU. Well played with that, and it flows so well.
This is one of the best fanfics I've read, I'm really enjoying reading it!
AliceCullen3 chapter 20 . 11/12/2018
LOVE IT!
Craftysdeadacc chapter 5 . 7/19/2018
Very clever :)
Craftysdeadacc chapter 1 . 7/19/2018
THIS IS GENIUS. AND YOU CANNOT CONVINCE ME OTHERWISE. Btw can’t wait for the yaoi army’s role in this story!
lifeissohard chapter 1 . 2/1/2018
These pickup lines are weirdly funny
lifeissohard chapter 1 . 2/1/2018
These pickup lines are weirdly funny
RedSchmetterling chapter 20 . 12/31/2017
I don't read such long fanfics very often, but man, this was a really good one. :o
I loved how the characters are portrayed, I never felt like someone was really OOC and that's really hard to achieve, when you have to write about so many people simultaneously and jump between their POVs.
One of my favourite things about this fic (except for your writing style) was that you included cardverse as a cameo. :) I just love that verse. Also yay I found one of the rare fanfics, where there are two pairings I like (this time UsUk and Spamano) and one I endure (DenNor, I actually ship NorIce more, but I see how people ship DenNor). I really liked the different approaches to the couples. And Iggy being the super-tsundere with his reactions at the end. xD I felt so bad for him, but I was already worrying, what would happen, if they find out about the book.
There's one thing I found slightly confusing tho. At the New Year's Eve chapter, where they kissed their tsundere, it sounded as if Artie and Al were kissing Sealand and not each other. It was a strange sentence construction or I just read it wrong, I don't know. But that took me down a peg or two...
Sometimes this fic could have had a bit more fluff, but overall I was really satisfied reading it. :
I loved the Halloween Party, where the semes were so overprotective; the soulmates thing was a bit cheesy, but I still didn't dislike it. Jealousy... I emphasize so much with Arthur and Co. there... poor Iggy. The Hogwarts thing was a nice twist, but that someone really dared to kidnap those three was very upsetting. D:
And of course the end-end. I would have liked it, if they had found out, which of the characters is them. I mean.. okay I see it with the three semes, they are REALLY dense. But the tsunderes are much more intelligent. They could have figured it out.
I feel like France, Japan and Hungary... I was like facepalming. Please you three, don't give up on those idiots and continue with your efforts. xD
I need to read more fanfics like this one. Thanks for writing it. :)
InvincibleArmada chapter 1 . 10/2/2017
Omg I've passed the last days on this story and I can't believe that I finished it ;A;
That was too AWESOME! Seriously. I've laughed so muuuch, ew.
At first, I doesn't really like Lovino's personality (he is my second favorite character, and my OTP is SpaMano, so it was a problem), BUT... I dunno, I found he changed at the middle of the story, and god I love all of them (ANTONIO).
That was cute. And a lot of feels. Yeeeah :D I'm happy for having found this story~
Bye byyye! (and sorry for my english..ew I know it sucks)
Lmb111514 chapter 20 . 9/22/2017
Haha, I loved that little add-in at the end of the actual show! Amazing job with this story; I really enjoyed all of it and how it all worked out. Alfred, Matthias, and Antonio are such oblivious dorks, but they make things interesting. Arthur, Lukas, and Romano are so frustrating at times- but you can't help but love them...Overall, the story was silly, sweet, funny, dramatic, and interesting. I hope to read more stories from you soon!
LERDYYYY chapter 4 . 9/1/2017
OMG I CANT FUCKING BELIEVE YOU USED THAT SONG AAAAHHHH IM SCREAMING. I KNOW THAT AMV WHICH JUST SO HAPPENS TO HAVE THE THREE SHIPS IN IT. i still have that video saved after 5 years lol
Tsuki-no-hoseki chapter 20 . 6/27/2017
I can't explain how much I love this story. I love how you potray the characters and I love your storyline. This story is and always will be one of my fav stories. I really like that you include all of my fav AUs especially the cardverse play. And how the characters fell in love wasn't too rushed. I found this story yesterday morning and binge read it until now. I just can't stop reading! I hope you keep writing. You're obviously a great writer. -
I.will.drink.this.coffee chapter 20 . 6/16/2017
Aww! Loved the ending, was pretty funny! And tbh, i think we all relate to Japan, Hungary, and France as shippers.

Also, Voltron is great and i highly recommend it. Your friend is 100% correct with shipping Klance and Shallura because they are flawless.
DoCaPZianne chapter 20 . 6/11/2017
I loved this so much! And now I'm going to have to find other fanfics that gave me the feels like this on did. Ugh this book was...Out of this world! Especially the Play parts. And why are they just so dense?
DoCaPZianne chapter 20 . 6/11/2017
I was sobbing at the UsUK part.. And laughing/crying at the end...
Iron Rose Writer chapter 20 . 6/11/2017
OMG. That was sooo META! I love you and this story. Thank you so much for writing it.
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