Reviews for Avenging Normandy
mastergamer14 chapter 16 . 5/25
Really psyched that this story was updated, so here are a few thoughts.

1.) In this story, has anything like Infinity War/Endgame happened?

2.) Where does magic fit in Mass Effect?

3.) Is Avengers Academy gonna be updated soon?

4.) How does a Persona/Mass Effect crossover sound?
Bucio chapter 16 . 5/22
It's good to see updates to these stories, in this chapter, with the aftermath of Jacob's encounter with his father, plus a catfigth between Jack and Miranda, and while Jack is comforted by Rocket (who offers her a place with the GotGs, when that mission ends), after Cap talks to TIM, we see how the relationship between Cap and Miranda changes , when they kiss, when they get carried away for the moment, and with everyone noticing that something happened between them (and I would almost say by making bets between the rest of the Normandy II crew)

One thing I hope to see too is that the relationship between Carol and Peter reaches those levels, or that Carol will stop being Tsundere and form a couple with Peter.

By the way, if you allow me an observation with the notes you put at the beginning of each chapter in your stories, try to be careful with spoilers, because in your story of KH x Avengers, by mentioning Sora and Kairi beating Xenahort and why of that beating, it is a great spoilers for those of us who have not yet reached that part of the game (I am just about to start the world of BH6) , so outright I play skipping those notes so I can continue reading the rest of the chapters in that story.

Otherwise I enjoy it very much (especially their adventures at Atlantis - Just miss showing the geniuses of the Avengers do experiments with Sora and Yuffie's Atlantean crystals, marveling at their properties - , the Colosseum, and Spira, giving a different ending to the events of FF X), I would have liked to see Sora befriend Liz, which would help later to make the passes with Peter and Gwen (thumbs up for that, the magic version of Spider Gwen powers, and that they are finally together) and when it is finally Wasp's turn to accompany Sora, maybe with Iron Man and Hank or Cap, to a technological world (perhaps Tron, BH6 - Cap and Aunt Cass? - or Wall-E).

Good luck and keep it up.
twilightnite13 chapter 16 . 5/19
This is very great work. I was nervous that you weren't going to continue this one after how things are with the pandemic. I'm glad to see you still writing.
Graymar1 chapter 16 . 5/19
There is something that got me wondering with the mutants being apart of of the alliance would that mean alliance would have a telepathy Divison used to gather information and lest say that Shepard did come back to life would the alliance even allow him to walk around with his spectre status witch allows him power in citadel space and with him coming back from the dead some people (among the humans) would think as some short god or Demi god and with people like Logan and others from the age of marvel would have to think that this person might not be Shepard but some sort of clone who thinks it Shepard and that Cerberus used a telepathy to give the clone memory’s or it could be a shapeshifter like skrull or mutant just using Shepard fame
Any way glad to see that your back keep the great work up
JimmyKrieger chapter 1 . 5/18
Will any of the other spacefaring empires of the MCU make an appearance in this story or the infinity stones
Jebest4781 chapter 16 . 5/18
been quite a while since reading this and it looked quite well
TheOrangeRobo chapter 16 . 5/18
Aw yeah, this story is back! WoOoOoOh!
free man writer chapter 16 . 5/18
Jeez it's been so long that I nearly forgot about this story. Great to see ya back and fantastic character moments all around.
Hamm1999 chapter 16 . 5/18
Will we be seeing an Infinity War/Endgame story arc for the sequel?
Starlord Master chapter 16 . 5/18
I love drama. It’s so exciting.

Which hero is your favorite?
StarStriker24 chapter 3 . 3/27
I realize this is an old story and Idk if anyone has said it but in some comics Hulk lives to the end of the universe. Just him, Thanos and... Ghost Rider I think? Anyway in most stories he can easily live centuries. Not like anything short of being launched into the sun could kill him anyway.

MCU hulk? Probably not so if that's what you're gking for then I agree.
Schazmen chapter 15 . 5/31/2019
So I have practically binged this story after finding it by chance. Excellent characterization, excellent story, great effects from Marvel on the rest of the galaxy, and I love everything about this.
...except for one thing, if I may criticize. Namely, you use 'minutes' way too often. A minute is a specific amount of time, and just hearing that all the time gets repetitive. Just looking at two people in silence for 'a few minutes' is a VERY awkward thing. I would heavily recommend you vary it up with seconds, heartbeats, moments, 'in the time it took to blink' or even 'what felt like a minute' but please use something else than just 'minutes.'
Arno Auditore 117 chapter 10 . 1/16/2019
I instantly thought of tali becoming the mass effect version of iron man, like grunt is with hulk. I would love that!
Graymar1 chapter 15 . 10/6/2018
Great story but could you add more history of the world and put more information about mutants and inhumans because you have onley been adding humans I don't see a lot of mutants and inhuman
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