please update! it's so good

Continua por favor

Please update soon, this is fantastic!

More

update please !

I hope you can update this soon. This is AWESOME! ! ! ! Atem and Tea forever! ! ! !

I'm excited to see a fic about this! This is a part of the arc I particularly like. Unfortunately, there aren't many fanfics based on it. So, definitely, thank you for writing this. I'm excited to see what more you come up with

~KeepOnWriting

"You don't have to BE the best. You just have to DO your best."

This was a very good chapter :-)
I like the changes you have made from the original episode. I hope you can come back to this someday and continue :-)

Cant wait for the next chapter :-D

So funny that you would post this now - I literally haven't thought about Yami and Tea and ages, and for some reason I went back and reread some of my old fics and yours and was thinking, "aww, a sweet couple, I should rewatch the show..." But this is better! Thanks for posting :)

Hey you :))
I can't thank you enough , you made my day just by posting this , I really liked it actually I loved every single story you wrote
You're Amazing keep going ! :* :-*

-Sorry if there is some mistakes but english isn't my mother language :/

This was very well written. I love your writing style! You really touched the emotional details of the pharaoh’s feelings and I felt all of his sorrow. Great job! I'd love to read more to see how your version of this episode advances.

:) yes me like very like
I CAN'T wait for another chapter and i hope Yami kiss Tea, and a make out seen

Good intro.
Looking forward to more.