So much of this story hits cultural chords with me, which is kind of weird since I don’t follow wrestling at all. Still, the unexpected Christina Grimmie nod is something that still gets to me. She was the first artist I really became a fan of on YouTube and I still listen to her and Sam Tsui’s Just a Dream frequently.

Massive props on the story. I’m really enjoying it so far, and Rhiannon is a truly excellent character. Thanks for writing!

I like your story. I think you did a great job with Hadvar's and Ralof's characterization and fabricating an escape with the both of them, unique to your story.

If I had to criticise two things here, it would be the one stormcloak who suggested rape, which felt off, a bit random and cringeworthy, and Rhiannon's continuous belief this being a set-up. Not the idea itself, but how far you took it: At the time where Alduin started attacking, with molten rocks falling from the sky, her still suggesting it being a set-up was already bordering on ridiculous, since she had already seen two people die at the time, but near the end, the sentencte "Where in the United States would there be room for a Dark Ages reconstruction that big?" takes the cake.
In regards to that, I suggest the following:
Delete this section:
"Where in the United States [...] miles from Philadelphia."
And insert something like:
"To her knowledge, she was definitely not in any part of the United States."

By the way, the next sentence should be with an 'here', not a 'there':
"How could she have been taken here [...]?"

At risk of sounding childish I beg you PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update this. I absolutely love this story and want to know what happens next.

Continue and update meridia azura kynareth dibela and mara see na'vi on planet pandora and thre have idea bright them into skyrim main heroine her famili and many friends is transformed into na'vi they is gifted by pandoran horses and ikrans .she build all 3 buildable houses in na'vi size with ikran nest and she reeducate elisif (she become lady of sword and shield true nord queen)later save some falmer children and use method from story true nord some potions to cure them into snow elf children.

Great chapter, I had so much fun reading it!
(I'm quite behind with the chapters, as reading this seems to be linked to myself playing the game, what I don't do so often. On the other hand, reading the story enhances the fun of playing, different playing styles notwithstanding.)
I particularly enjoyed all your cross-references and hints, and how the Skyrim universe unfolds for Rhiannon, and how she's putting pieces together. I think my favourite is the lack of a visitor centre and café at High Hrothgar, that really cracked me up! :o)

This is a very interesting story. I really like Rhiannon, and the fact that she's Welsh like I am (though I'm only half). I don't know much about wrestling but you write about it in a way that keeps me interested nonetheless. I particularly liked reading the reactions in the real world to Rhiannon's disappearance, as well as the news articles and the parents missing her at Christmas.

I hope to see an update soon!

More Please I Beg Of Thee

Good chapter!

Glad to see this continued :)

Update again soon please!

btw any updates for the Dark Companion or Tabula Avatar forthcoming?

Hope this gets updated soon.

Another wonderful chapter. You really build on the canon very well and showcase the world and the character amazingly.

I've seen this a few times on TtH, kind of ignored it thinking it sounded rather silly. But I've read a few of your fics, and figures you come let it off. Glad I did, this is one of the better Skyrim fics I've read. Rhiannon is believable as an OC, she is not some nerdboy thinking this is the best thing ever, she is an athlete with enough genera savvy to not pull the really stupid mistakes.

Right Forsworns are not bad it's like they don't do cannibalism or consort with hagravens or didn't sacrifice people to harvest their hearts or kidnap people.

Yeah! Nice update! Rhiannon has bested Borkul and the Silverblood will pay!

I still really love this fanfiction and I really want to see more chapters

YAY!
Glad to see this one again. Rhiannon survived the mines and the Silver Bloods are going to get theirs someday soon.
Rhiannon made friends also good.
Diolch yn fawr! and keep up the good work