This was interesting keep it going

I hate stories like this. Making a character who can just instantly solves problems and simply delays them so he can have fun takes away any challenge and suspense. Next time you do a remake of Date A Live, you can make Shido strong and smart but not THIS OP.

Dammit apostrophes are being used incorrectly

Could you do more fanfic of anime of your choice?

So i just read the first chapter, and im assuming his secret is he. Can fuck the spirit out of them? Also good work man, but the hotswap between shido pov and narrater is weird also the italics for shidos text, but over all this is great

Thank you for the update. Love your work.

Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens.

is this story dead?

I me my

Forgive my grammar I'm writing these on my phone.

This story has a LOT of pacing issues, as well as the situations. For one, it seems like you made Shido omnipresent, like he knows everything, and the pacing is so fast, that its like its a summary. Stories are supposed to be fun yo read, not just. Here's info the MC needs, oh he has it instantly. Here's a situation, oh, he said a few words and they're instantly accepted. Fix your pacing, and your presentation, and this could be a decent story. Aldo why is only Shido's dialogue in italics, it doesn't make sense and actually annoyed me a lot, and detracted from the story.

Yes... yes... kill that witch... kill her... embrace the dark side... and make it your Ally... may the dark side be with you... _

If this fic in hiatus?

I get the feeling that the 4th wall breaking is part of "bullshiting 101" somehow. it's pretty funny. :)

good story bro I approve of the fan service