Reviews for Dragon of Justice
thegrison chapter 2 . 6/14
To question your review 'guest's. Yes all the superman stuff is true but it is far from a god. Use a green glowing rock and down he goes like a rock in water. Another weakness is Magic. A spell can hurt him and I'd hit with a bunch or strong dowels he will go down. Yes while he can go a long time in a fight he needs the sun to recharge. Lure him in a steel outer lined lead room throw a fist size green glowing rock then shut the door. No way out, no fresh air, glowing green rock of death, no way to call for help and what is he to do? Also we have no reference of Narutos. It is earth like but NOT earth. The grass in his world could be 10 times weaker or 1000 times stronger than earth's. Chakra could be a weakness of superman since it is both physical and spiritual energy combine in the body. Magic energy is made of what? Spiritual, mystical, or bio-electric. Also it is fiction as in not real and author has free will in writing.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/7
To answer the unasked question...

Superman would crush Naruto. Canon wise, meaning going by comics, there is not a being in the Naruto-verse who could stand up to Superman, not even the most recently revealed OP'd Otsutsuki in Boruto. Most don't realize this, because Superman is EXTREMELY NERFED in the cartoons, but he's basically a god in the comics, Wonder Woman even referred to him as one and was one of the reasons she had a relationship with him, which was purely sexual and purely based on the fact he has the powers of a god.

In the comics, when he and Doomsday clashed, the area around them was leveled just from the shockwaves of their punches. When Doomsday slammed Supes into the ground, it was like a bomb had been dropped, and Superman just got right back up. He's seriously OP, if he were to PUNCH the Jubi, it would probably explode, and in terms of speed, he has been shown to cross the US in mere seconds with his flight. His heat vision is also equal in power to Darkseid's Omega Beams, the only difference being the latter can shift directions, but in terms of raw power, at full blast, Superman's heat vision can emit the destructive power of a bomb.

No one in Naruto is that powerful, not even the Otsutsuki. Also keep in mind, Superman has moved Extinction Level asteroids with his raw strength and lifting a double decker plane to him is like lifting a dumbell. The only reason he hasn't accidentally leveled Metropolis, is extreme control, I mean if his and Doomsday's punches connecting created a shockwave that cracked concrete buldings down an entire metropolitin street, imegine if he actually HIT the building. Also keep in mind he DOESN'T have to worry about Chakra Exhaustion.
Jeku Kusanagi chapter 6 . 7/13/2019
Great chapter man, when you going start next chapter?
thegrison chapter 6 . 6/23/2019
Needs work. Great idea though. Why would he even sell the 1st hokage necklace for money? He has the shadow clones who he can make hundreds and hold for a couple hours. He can work day labor jobs for a few days and make a bunch of money. Like 50 for 8 hours jobs equaling 60 dollars min per clone so 50 clones 3000 per day. Lets say for 10 days and 30,000 easy. Then a trip to Vegas and did some betting and like magic tons of money due to great gambling luck. Lets say 100 clones over a bunch of casinos and each has 300 in cash. As long as it is under 10,000 earnings per clone no tax flag. Say each clone made 8,000 each. So now it is 800,000 in a day of betting.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/27/2019
Please do update it I like this
Monster King chapter 6 . 3/19/2019
Great job please continue
Guest chapter 2 . 1/15/2019
Because a pawnshop would have billions of dollars to spare...
guest chapter 6 . 12/3/2018
if I may say about your poll I think it should be both he should only kill those that cant be redeem and just beat up those that have a chance that's my thought.
MindForgedMan chapter 1 . 12/2/2018
This first chapter is cringe-inducingly stupid. Pass.
darkrage2001 chapter 1 . 10/31/2018
Great story keep it up
Kuro Tamashi chapter 1 . 10/24/2018
You had me until you changed Naruto's appearance.
the shadow overlord279 chapter 6 . 10/16/2018
Interesting story, wonder when the whole "I'm a dragon" conversation will happen?
the shadow overlord279 chapter 5 . 10/16/2018
Good ending to the arc, I'm glad you have scenes with Naruto alone with other members. It would suck if he was just an add on.

Though I notice you use ! A lot. ! Should only be used when a character is shouting. So Batman, for instance, will rarely need it with him being the silent type and all.
the shadow overlord279 chapter 3 . 10/16/2018
Love how things are developing, and Naruto's interactions with Wonder Woman, but I feel there was a double standard and a bit of hipocracy with Naruto's scuffle with John. He sucker punches John then says it is no time to fight? Also, how come no one scolds him for punching an ally when the world is ending?
the shadow overlord279 chapter 1 . 10/16/2018
I'm really confused why the hate for Konoha. They arn't gonna be antagonists, Naruto's not going back to his world (I assume), and Naruto isn't going to be a broody recluse (from what I can tell). It all seems really unnecessary. And now he has no connection to demons or things considered to be demons, which was the whole reason he was hated, so nothing to worry about.

Also, on a more unimportant note: why no whiskers? It doesn't impact the story, but c'mon those are his trademark!
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