I knew when I saw it was discontinued that I shouldn't have started reading this. But I did and now I love it, very unfortunate there might not be anymore, big fan of lancaster and would like to see if Ruby and Jeane could somehow get together in this.

I know you've been absent for over a year now and that you will probably never return to this story. Still, I wanted to let you know that this has been one of my favourite things to read on this site. I really loved it for all that's been posted. Thank you.

Problem with this plan: what stops Roman from talking everything he knows about Ruby, Cinder etc to authorities as revenge? In canon, getting him caught after Breach was part of plan and Roman was in. This obviously does not apply here.

This kind of liability is best assassinated. Dead men tell no tales.

Unfortunate that this story is now dead, I really liked it.

While this has been discontinued, it is still amazing. Shame that the outcome of this story will have to be imagined by inferior minds.

it should be cool to see where things go from here, a bit less of a focus on the combat might be nice though

ozpin isnt exactly a saint either, I wonder if jaune notices ruby's attempted manipulation

nice job keeping up the grimdark, and for making the lines of good and evil a lot more murky than they appear

i wonder how the teams will play out,and if blake will be as observant when it comes to jaune as she was with ruby

its seems like the unstoppable force and immovable object will be on a team, the combat was a nice touch to establish contrast, but it would be best if it wasnt overdone

ozpin's certainly got charisma, i can see why it makes him a target, i wonder whats the reason behind the revolution going on?

yang should make for an interesting wildcard here, i wonder how the estranged siblings will interact?

I suppose that you dont become an assassin if your happy with the way things are at home...

interesting contrast that youve set up, it should be cool to see how they conflict with their cover identities

its interesting to see ruby as a villain, I suppose this rose has poison thorns