i love this its better than the real books!

Hahahahhaha. Lol.

Aka the stables indecent

When I saw this update I was like WHAT? But she finished it. Then I read it and I was like OHHH!

I like the story so far but I don't really like what you did at some parts. Piper has been pretty much useless. A majority of the story is done by Calypso which yea she's cool but you made her too overpowered. No one else is really of use so much. She most likely could've done the whole quest on her own but the others are filler characters. So personally I rate this Story as a story alone as probably a 8/10 but as a Fanfic that is based on another story and plot probably a 5/10 or 6/10

Love the story, can't wait for the sequel xxx

Why the heck does this fic not have more reviews! It's awesome and definetly one of the better fics out there. Honestly, you did a great job and I'm looking forward the Escaping Tartarus story. You're are great writer!

Wow.

Nice job again! I liked how you did make Calypso black out, so Leo has to save not only Hazel and Frank, but her as well.
~Lout

Why does this story have so few reviews/favs/follow?
This is amazing. It's a simple idea, yet perfectly executed. All the characters are more or less in character, which is very important to me, and the plot is at just the right pace. Out of all 21 flawlessly written chapters so far, I've only found a single, minuscule thing I dislike slightly. What with adding Calypso to the mix of the already-established Seven, the others get fewer roles and as pushed to the side. Calypso also seems a bit overpowered, but that's understandable, since she's the daughter of Atlas and all.
I envy your updating skills. This was published... what, ten days ago? Eleven, maybe? If you're writing this as you publish a new chapter... wow. Great work! If you're not, great work anyway, because the writing quality is great. First-person narrative is a lot harder than it seems (third-person is actually recommended for beginners, surprisingly), yet you make it seem effortless. It also flows well. Well done!
~Lout

OK how the hell has this only got one review? This is original and just amazing. I can't think of anything better. This needs to be noticed more! Don't lose faith in your story either it's really good.

Very interesting plot you have here; it's very original, which is pretty rare in this fandom now. I'm really hooked and can't wait for what will happen next!
Just one thing- you switch tenses. For example (this isn't a direct quote) you have "I [Calypso] healed" some of the demigods, and then "I [she] say [says] shortly". Those are past and present tense; pick one and stick with it. Other than that, this is great, and I loved the fighting scene and first person narrative!