Freaking amazing! I wish you could’ve written this on the show. Such a perfect scene and still in keeping with their characters. Love it!

this one shot totally should have been in the show this was so good

Loved this story and the way you wrote it.

ow I liked it. I liked the awkwardness and how uncomfortable Emma is with being comfortable with him. (does that make sense?) And I like that Hook simply appreciates the situation as it is and doesn't try to push it further. :)

Wow. Just, wow. I feel like I'm in the minority of people (at least who I know) who liked the Neverland arc, but just wow, I think this might be my favorite fic set around that time. It's been awhile since I re-lived 3A, but this fits so well with where they were at the time and I'm just, in love with this characterization. I'm gonna reread this several hundred more times probably, but great job and thank you for sharing this.

I enjoyed this little analysis of Emma and Killian after Ariel. I love how many times Killian is afraid to breathe for fear he'll put a stop to whatever is making Emma want to talk.

I wish we had gotten this exact scene, this is so well written and rewarding. The characterization is flawless, the manner of speaking is on point. The teasing amidst all of the confessions was adorable and completely believable, especially for this point in their relationship. Ughhh, just perfect! Loved it

I really wish they did have this conversation!