Fue bueno amigo, pero como la descripción decía "Ranma, Shampoo" pensé que habría algo más entre ellos
De todos modos no me quejo
Felicidades

He's also one of the best martial artists in Nerima, not quite as good as Ranma, but only slightly below Ryoga if I remember right.

It don't really settle it, Ranma don't care about Amazon law, and Japanese law don't agree with it, so all it does is make it so Shampoo don't have to kill Ukyo or Akane if they manage to marry Ranma.

Ranma Neko will probably rest in any sufficiently kind persons lap, even if he don't know them at all, don't forget the one who got him out of the state the first time, was a kindly old woman he didn't know, so the only requirement is probably seeming nice and non-hostile.

genma at least seemed to think he was helping ranma, this other guy is just an a$$hole

Mouko Takabisha... Never thought someone other than Ero-Sennin would have HIM use it... Then again, it couldn't have been more appropriate.

Decent story- it could use some editing for grammar, spelling (or at least spellcheck errors), and probably a bit of work on the dialogue and original characters (several seemed a bit superfluous like the Hibiki brother), but it was a fun enough read. The villains plot was fairly interesting, though they themselves actually came off a touch two-dimensional. I also think the title could use some work- it never quite seemed to be the focus of the fic. I'll be checking out your other works to see what they're like based on this though.

Hmm... not entirely sure about the random addition of a bunch of close family members to all the cast families, but this has been fairly decent so far. I do think the younger crews 'voices' need to be worked on a bit though- they all seem to have pretty similar personalities other than outright descriptions.

Pfft. Troika has no idea who he's fucking with. He and his soldiers and whatever organization he works for (even if it turns out to be the government) are all dead. Literally, Ranma would genuinely kill them.

Why do authors keep saying "face fault/face-fault/facefault"? It is obviously incorrect, so why write it? It should say "face-vault".

Genma never actually hurt Ranma beyond the Neko-ken, and I don't think he realized a small child isn't going to take it as well as an adult would. He is a complete moron but not a genuinely bad person. His idiocy just causes him to do bad things because he doesn't realize it hurts people or what hurting someone even means.

That girl's father, though, is clearly making a conscious effort to be an evil bastard.

It'd be awesome if Ranma learned how to draw upon the power of the Neko-ken without going cat.

That bastard hurt kittens! Oh, and his daughter. Those poor kittens!

Nice Ending. Final Fight with the fey was shorter then I thought it was going to be, but all in all I think you did a great job with the resolution! I thought Ryouga was going to say "Ha I knew it was in the basement!" During the Epilogue, ah well. Great Job.

Its a great story, but the name is possibly less than ideal.