aaah this is very sexy. I toally agree with your idea that Freed could be a very hot dominant! Especially as someone who also sees the worth in words, this has me squirming in my seat. this is well written and beautiful and I lvoe it!

Whew that was hot!

God. Everything you write is amazing! I love you. Please, don't stop! I'll read everything...every-fucking-thing you write. Forever.

Hot damn...it's always the quiet ones you have to watch out for...

Wow! talk about, hot hot hot hot hot! And, sensually sweet in their love for each other!

I told myself to leave a review here, too! It's Sel/freedthedark from tumblr, btw! I agree with most what's already written here!

I was very pleased to see that there's another story that does dom!Freed justice. As you may know I totes headcanon him as naturally dominant - reserved, calm, gentlemanly usually but he loves to have control and GOD YES he can be such a hot and perfect dominant. No matter whether in Freed x female or Freed x male ships. While many just shove him into the role of a sub, which I can see happening if he has enough trust and a deep bond with his partner, I do think that judging by his personality and way of acting that he's rather a natural dom than sub.

It's a bit hard for me to see Lu and Freed in a real dom/sub relationship and if this is a constant thing I'm usually not a fan of it, but this oneshot was very sexy and well written!

So yes, I liked it and I'm looking forward to hopefully more hot dom!Freed in the future!

hum... how intriguing... so freed has lucy in a dominant/submissive relationship. how unique. hope you had a nice new years eve and new years day... i find it very odd sinse i dont know anyone in this type of give/take/lover interaction. i mean im not sure if i do know any in this bit of boy/girl thing. excellent... you seem to know what you are talking about... i have read other tales of yours... they are all good... please continue writing this fasinating prose.

Ooooh nana! I loved it so much! You should definitely do a follow up if the plot bunnies ever lead you down a similar hole:)
I'm so happy I finally get some reading time to catch up!
Okay, I digress to another one of your stories that I am behind on,
SUN

It was so well written! But D/s relationships are just not my thing. sorry

Perv yes, but a damned devilishly good one. I demand that you receive three rounds of CHEERS for this monstrosity and how you came up to this idea.. I shared that link with a friend/client and she got a giggle. Said I Made her week, since th baby is a week from being born and not showing signs of vacating her womb

Fabulous. And sexy as hell. God, I fucking love you! Freed is a glorious Dom... So... So... So... Sexy...

Oh wow.
Just wow.
This is amazing. I would love to see what their entire relationship is like, how it started, what goes on from here. It would make for an awesome story.
See ya around! :)
EddingsFan

Holy shit balls! You do dominant Freed such incredible justice. That man could so be a closet dom. He's got all the classic signs... or so I'm told. Hehehe... Also now I want to try this. The hubby will love you :) Thank you so much Triplet! ! I love you more than air itself!

Great story!
The last paragraph was very sweet :)
And I agree, Freed makes a hot dominant!

that was hot! could totalt see him be a dominant