niceee

naruto's behavior doesn't look like anbu.

You are a fucking RETARD please go die in a hole and take this pece of fucking shit with you

I like this story you should continue it

I'm really liking the story but I'm curious about one thing ,what happened to jaune?

keep up the great work

I know you said your story was inspired by In Between Two Worlds, but from I can gather the only difference is that you decided to change was the initial reasons for his attendance in Beacon. Some of the scenes are so alike that you actually copied the dialogue. I am not sure why you decided to write this story because as far as I can tell you wanted to write the story In Between Two Worlds over again and have only made the smallest of changes between the two to keep them from being identical. You even wrote that your final fight scene of the initiation would have been exactly the same and you didn't want that so you just skipped it. If you want your story to become interesting and more than a second rate copy, because as you have said In Between Two Worlds is better, you need to change some things and I don't mean a few sentences of dialogue like you've been doing.

I hope you update soon. The story is enjoyable and has an interesting concept

this story hasn't been updated in 6 months R.I.P and i was just enjoying it to :(

I'm guessing Yang's gonna get the "explorers to you, invaders to us" speech next chapter?

I like it, if you're going to do a pairing then for the love of all that is Monty dont make it a harem. I'm begging you, harems just have a way of killing a story for me since they are always the writers fever dream.

Hello, saya suka sekali cerita fanfic ini. Boleh tahu kapan diupdate, bro?
Terima Kasih

love the story idea, looking forward to narutos time at beacon. wonder if weiss will get the stick up her ass removed since she isnt with her canon team

Awesome chapter.
Keep on going.

Good chapter.