I am reallyninterested in seeing how this will pan out, as Allen gets older. The only thing i am missing is Black Allen, the frightening gambler.

Please update again. This story is great!

I have no idea why, but when I say that final scene in my mind, it just felt like something truly tragic was about to screw Allen over.

this is nice.. i always thought what if allen didnt meet cross. glad someone wrote the story down xD hope to see an update soon xoxo

he's not rehabilitating his hand. the 're' implies that he is doing it again, yet his arm has been paralyzed from birth until he first activated it. so this is simply abilitating, since he's doing it for the first time.
random little rant about something most people will never notice but somehow really bothers me

he would play poker to get money for cross and that was his rehabilitation method. thanks cross

This is such a wonderfully sweet remake of the story, I'm so glad I found this fic. I love the way you write small Allen, he seems so wary and hopeful at the same time, and I'm so glad he has Tiedoll to try to keep him safe. Their relationship is really heartwarming to read, and so is everyone else. You have an incredible way of showing emotions, I nearly cried twice this chapter alone. This fic was a joy to read, and I know you might not be coming back to it so I want to say thank you for sharing what you did 3

Прекрасно. Продолжение пожалуйста.

Hey,
let me tell you that I love your story. Allen's character is very realistic and fitting to the change of master and experience. Also, I really like the perspectives from different people who don't usually get playtime all that often - Tiedoll and Toma, for example. In fanfiction it's rare to see the main character from a view that is neither himself nor the 'omniscient viewer', if you know what I mean.
So, all in all, I really like this and I'll be looking forward to new chapters! :)

I'm in love with this story!

Ih allen, you adorable sweet boy! Updare soon!

Thanks for updating!

Good job Allen! I do see his growing fanaticism... I hope Tiedoll reassures him before he goes off course

Very good, even though it was shot. I enjoyed it a lot. Update soon.

Just one fight of many, but yes, Allen, Tiedoll would be proud of you.