Reviews for Green Sun, Black Shadows
Dontus -not Donut- Powerus chapter 13 . 7/28/2019
First, Lelouch's dream as an omake or what did lelouch dreamt in that particular chapter before putting in the author's notes. Second... Basically, Lelouch got soul r raped. Third, why am I getting a Milly x Lulu vibe? Because my back is getting a lot chilly lately... But I can't deny, it seemed perfect... Milly the Cheery woman who's parents trying to take away her freedom but fiercefully bites back and has a cheery happy life that she enjoys with what little freedom she could muster while Lelouch, an exiled prince from a family filled with Darwinisim that bite off more than he could chew now out for revenge and is forever locked in a cage that he made himself. namely, Zero and Lamperouge. Never had the freedom of being him except behind a mask bound by rules.

Also, how about having lelouch drink or eat something with cc's saliva without him even knowing it and the two kiddies decided to play with the geass inside h and get Accidentally have an alwaays active geass but since he's a primordial he can't or he does not have a geass power. Just for cosmetic.
Ferdiad chapter 8 . 1/12/2018
Not sure what was going on with the last part with the butchering. Mind explaining if it's not too spoilerish?
Ferdiad chapter 7 . 1/12/2018
Not much to say other than I wasn't expecting Lelouch to be charming the pants off all the demons he meets.
Ferdiad chapter 5 . 1/11/2018
Nothing much to say here. It's pretty good, no major issues.
Ferdiad chapter 1 . 1/11/2018
Interesting, Lelouch is pretty susceptible to the corrupting effects compared to most who exalt I'd say.
TinyWanderingPen chapter 13 . 12/23/2017
I just wanted to say that I really enjoy this fic. I only have a passing familiarity with Exalted (though I've played other White Wolf games) and you've done well enough in explaining the lore here - in an entertaining, non-didactic way - that I'm following along just fine, though occasional wiki lookups enhance the experience. Exalted is an interesting choice to fuse with Code Geass, but going from the perspective of slightly-more-sympathetic Green Sun Princes is really appropriate here. I keep expecting Kallen to Exalt as a Dragon-blooded or Suzaku to Exalt as a Solar or Lelouch's Lunar mate, and then they'll REALLY have to pick a side. I'm also curious about C.C. and Geass's role in this universe.

Either way, really great stuff here! I love this fic. I don't know if you have any interest in continuing it, but I certainly appreciate what's here and I would be delighted to read more. :)
amimai002 chapter 13 . 12/13/2016
Interesting story, interesting poodle, interesting characters. Was a fun read!
Akuma-Heika chapter 6 . 11/12/2016
is the silver scarf supposed to represent Basalt? What of the white circle? Purple face?

Do the Alchemical Exalted exist or was that primordial destroyed with the universe being messed up? Will Lulu get some of them as allies if they exist on Earth?

With his Exaltation, will Lulu get a better physique? Somewhat explained, but it is not explained what he can now do nor if he will get better.

It is amusing that your Lulu is so dense.

Wouldn’t one of the dragons in his anima have black wings (I am assuming the twin dragons represent Oramus and Ebon Dragon)?

If Malfeas had infinite power how was he tricked into creating Sol Invictus?

I enjoy Seyrun’s enthusiastic rendition of Fuck the gods lol

Will Lulu have Akuma created? They are also Infernal Exalted (and the original Infernal Exalted) and even if they are not the match of the Green Sun Princes, they are still superior to humans and maybe equal to Dragonblooded considering they are artificial Demonblooded who can actively evolve…and depending on the circumstances of their rebirth maybe stronger than Dragonblooded (such as a Akuma created by a Third Circle Demon or one made from a Terrestrial Exalted).

The one who BUILT it TO BE Dragonblooded

Why can the Guren not be piloted by Exalted or Sorcerers (Essence users)?

I can see Hell(demon)forged Brass being used to give the Alexanders enhanced armor to make up for their low defense…and maybe boost their stats. Maybe make Demonblooded Knightmares or Warstriders (ala Evangelion or just through the use of magical materials with a demon becoming an Unwoven Coadjutor like the Eva’s had Cores) to create more powerful weapons/akuma. The Mark Nemo would be a suggestible base considering how it was made and how it was piloted (with the Pilot bonded to it).

And even if it DOES NOT SUFFICE…

Now that I think about it, having Akuma would be a lot better than human or possibly even demon troops (considering he is Limited to 1st Circle Demons for all intents and purposes), and since he is a Green Sun Prince, equal to a 2nd Circle Demon (according to you), he should be able to create 1st Circle Akuma on his own. Akuma, unlike demons, do not need Essence to materialize on Earth, thus they have a lot more Essence for combat.

Althing is up to ITS members

BTW, I believe I found the origin of the word Althing, atheling.

REMIND Creation of its True Masters!

back in place, leaving the six EXALTED alone.

I hope you don't mind my grammar corrections.
Akuma-Heika chapter 3 . 11/11/2016
I just realized Seyrun could pretend to be an angel and that Lulu is a prophet. Technically speaking, Seyrun was a messenger (the English word for angel) of the Yozi (a type of god) and Lulu is now a diplomat (a prophet) and administrator for them. The Three Circles of Demons of Exalted even work out well because in Christian thought (Roman Catholic specifically) there are three Angelic Circles each made of three types of angels.

Will Nunnally become Dragonblooded? I am guessing Marianne was a Lost Egg considering she became the Knight of Two on skill alone and was better than the Knight of One…but that would mean she had no geass…

Will you make a way to have Malfeas version Shadowlands? One of the ideas for the Reclamation (as you yourself also stated) is to make Creation a mirror of Malfeas. So would it be possible to make areas of Earth that are overlapped by Malfeas? Oblivion is more alien than Malfeas is to Creation (considering it is the opposite of Creation), so if it could be done for them…
Akuma-Heika chapter 13 . 11/6/2016
I know I semi-joked about Lulu becoming a Titan himself last review (since it is possible in canon for the Infernal Exalted to become them), but with him generating his own Circles…lol

Who is Sinni’s mother? She mentions her, but does not identify her.

Calming down, Lelouch SAT down and began to think.

The woman hitting on Lulu, was she the ‘vampire’?
nevermind

Silencers are not that good with erasing sound, but considering the type of gun they are firing they would be quiet regardless (they are rail guns, so no explosions launching the bullets)

So who was the girl at the end of chapter 12? Mao from KoN?

Did Lian eat the guy?
Akuma-Heika chapter 10 . 11/6/2016
I am a little surprised, based on the comments by the guy I thought Kaguya was a Solar.

Will Kallen eventually Exalt (she has dragonblood afterall)?

Will Lelouch become a Titan (in canon, a number of GSP’s aim to become Titans themselves)?

Will Lelouch learn how to corrupt Solar’s like the Abyssals can? That would give him a great boon!

Will Rarity create the Zero Armor (from Knightmare of Nunnally)?
Dragonheart Of Ireland chapter 13 . 10/7/2016
Now things, are getting interesting! Please update!
DarkBlade the Damned chapter 13 . 3/27/2016
Hello Realm

Since I have been enjoying this fic so much since I found it I thought I had better drop you a review to express my appreciation.

I loved Code Geass, Lelouch was a fantastic character and watching him play Anti Hero mastermind made it one of my favorite Anime series of all time.

Sadly most fics I have read based on the series seem to either attempt to rehash things. Or tell the same story in a slightly different setting.

But this, this blew my mind.

I was not that familiar with Exalted before but now the setting has my definite interest. And it just seems to fit so well for Lelouch as an Infernal!
You (or at least I) can fully understand why he feels such loyalty to the Yozi. After all there story is so similar to his only on a much larger scale.

I also love the way that some of the Code Geass characters are being modifiled and empowered.
The idea with Kaguya I may have predicted as its within her character.
But Milly, that I never would have come up with and yet it suits her so well.

That's what I actually love in this fic. In canon I think part of the reason Lelouch pretty much broke down was that he was ultimately alone. The black knights were loyal to Zero but there was no one close to himself, particularly after CC had her mind trapped.

But now already Lelouch has a Coven to help and support him. I am sure Milly will be aggressive in making him relax as needed.

Anyway I may not review again as I am now following and voting on this quest over on Sufficient Velocity, but I wanted to thank you again for bringing it to my attention.

It is truly one of the Jewels amoung much of the dross here on

rgds

DarkBlade
OBSERVER01 chapter 13 . 2/28/2016
Excellent chapter
OBSERVER01 chapter 12 . 2/28/2016
Giant mutant poodle. That is just evil!
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