| Reviews for Fallout: Commonwealth's Rebirth |
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lolistarkiller chapter 5 . 7/4 I’m glad you updated and hope you and your family are staying safe! Can’t wait for your next update! |
Rundivyn chapter 5 . 6/15 So why are we following nick and piper? Shouldn’t this be about Nate and Nora? You know the people who originally appeared to be the main characters? |
Joseph Sage chapter 5 . 6/15 Good story and I like what you done with the wasteland, looking forward to the next chapter. |
edboy4926 chapter 5 . 6/14 Nice to see this back. Awesome chapter. |
lolistarkiller chapter 4 . 4/16 I really like this fanfic! It just makes me sad that more people haven’t written the what if they both survived scenario. I wish more fallout fanfic writers would go for this scenario, it really makes for a better dynamic than the romances in the game. |
Jacob22 chapter 3 . 1/18 Great story can’t wait for the next chapter |
Sad sleep depriv chapter 3 . 12/30/2019 Post mor o super mutiny kill u raaaaaaah! |
ReviewerDWJ chapter 3 . 12/15/2019 Well this is a surprise. I haven’t seen this story in a long while that I needed to go back and re-read the first two chapters. It still a good read and I like how you are writing this it makes me wonder if you are taking some creation club content into account. Looking forward to the next chapter. ReviewerDWJ |
eragon95159 chapter 3 . 12/15/2019 Continue and update please soon. maybe they find source of boron B in periodic table(make B sand and B water and use it to decontaminate radiated places and make Commonwealth is safe from wild radiation).maybe they find seeds of plants from before war and start process regrow (to make Commonwealth green live place )maybe they build dams with water purifiers on rivers in Commonwealth to speed up regrow project. and more. |
eragon95159 chapter 2 . 6/30/2019 continue and update please. look on fnafiction story s/5797378/1/ and read it use some ideas .like they create serum to evolve into new race like navi from avatar togruta or twilek from star wars and they group (after grow into full independent village)as full navi from avatar complete with bigger houses biggler furnitures bigger armors clothing weapons just alll bigger for they new evolved forms(immune to radiation start proces rergow land by changet plants (like in avatar).and more. |
SanaSata 52 chapter 2 . 10/16/2018 Down with Critics United! They are the cancer to our society. The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter. No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small. Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him. His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp. A great moment we all should not pass. Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind! If you are on the same page, cp this message. And Bella119 is dumb. Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help. cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D CrystalRei should quit. Now onto the actual review: Nora answered by firing at the unsuspecting person hiding behind the truck, killing the person. Nate then ran towards the truck as Nora watched his back, much how they used to do back in Alaska. "Tangos, 12 o'clock." Nate shouted as he began firing at the three people firing at the man standing on the balcony. We have the same destiny. ;P; |
VistTasnya-69 chapter 1 . 10/16/2018 Down with Critics United! They are the cancer to our society. The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter. No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small. Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him. His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp. A great moment we all should not pass. Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind! If you are on the same page, cp this message. And Bella119 is dumb. Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help. cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D CrystalRei should quit. Now onto the actual review: Few minutes and five dead roaches later, the couple stood in front of a door labeled 'Overseer's Office'. "What do you think we'll find here?" Nate asked, staring at the door. I sent flowers to the baby's mother. ;P; |
Thomsaksako-2 chapter 2 . 10/16/2018 Down with Critics United! They are the cancer to our society. The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter. No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small. Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him. His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp. A great moment we all should not pass. Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind! If you are on the same page, cp this message. And Bella119 is dumb. Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help. cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D CrystalRei should quit. Now onto the actual review: I know so of you are wondering why I have written another one while not following up my The Terran Variable story. Truth is, after seeing the AWESOMENESS of Fallout 4, the new in-game stuff Bethesda Software added, and the story of the Sole Survivor, I just couldn't stop my brain from creating this story. Chris defeated the vampire knight!. T_T |
EisaII66 chapter 1 . 10/15/2018 Down with Critics United! They are the cancer to our society. The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter. No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small. Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him. His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp. A great moment we all should not pass. Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind! If you are on the same page, cp this message. And Bella119 is dumb. Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help. cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D CrystalRei should quit. Now onto the actual review: "Glad to help," the woman replied, smiling while her companion shook Preston's offered hand. "Name's Nora Adams and this is my husband, Nate." Dr. O_O |
ArturiTmas 61 chapter 1 . 10/15/2018 Down with Critics United! They are the cancer to our society. The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter. No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small. Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him. His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp. A great moment we all should not pass. Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind! If you are on the same page, cp this message. And Bella119 is dumb. Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help. cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D CrystalRei should quit. Now onto the actual review: "Please tell me you saw that." Nate asked Nora, who was equally shocked at what she saw. Both girls are wearing white suits. xD |