Loved their timey-wimey introduction to Astra. Sad that the Doctor still was doubting, but I guess not surprising. Love that he's all-in now.

Anything that freaks the Doctor out and starts him gibbering is a good thing in my book.

Awwwwwwww! So cute and sweet! Loved it!

You know I keep Imaginig Astra as a young Hayley Atwell or Lily James, am I close to how you're imagining her?

Holy crap this was great.
Good job!

I'm not crying, I'm very much not crying right now...Excuse me I need a kleenex.

I didn't know this story, but it does explain a lot of things. It's weird, because I have you on author alert; so how come I didn't receive a notice for this story?

Somehow my alerts for your stories have been off since just after the Tyler Factor so, when I looked back at the Tyler Factor thinking "Oh, I loved this author's works and especially this series. I can't believe they never updated again... maybe I'll just re-read everything..." I was incredibly excited to find everything you've written since! I'm now reading everything (love this- so much! SO excited!) Quick question, though. I seem to have completely blanked on the origin of Athena- though not on Athena herself. Is she this stories version of Jenny or a spin-off of River... I remember so much from this series of FF because I love it so much and I'm completely embarrassed I can't remember! I intended to go back and find Athena's origin or where Rose initially finds out about her origin but... I thought I would also ask. so sorry for the interruption! Thank you so much for writing this- you are an AMAZING writer and I'm so excited to read your more recent stories and then to go back and re-read all of the others because I'm just so EXCITED you're back (even though you never actually left)

FANTASTIC!,
Reader

I'm a little bit disappointed that Missy won't be appearing, but this is still an awesome series. :)

Keep up the good work! :D

That was the most fantastic ending I could have possibly imagined! And Rose's speech was just perfect, had me smiling like crazy. Then the proposal - the Doctor's reaction to Rose having been his fiancee the entire time they traveled, kinda wished I could have seen it! Makes me kids sad that we won't get to see them traveling together

Haha poor Rose! Wouldn't it be more like the time Lord's? So sad that there only a chapter left :(

What? Omg really? Jack and Jenny? Or Athena in this case. Damm I did not see that coming lol. Guess it makes sense in a way but still, I think I'm in shock too now. And why wouldn't the Doctor mind or get mad at Jack? Poor Rose. I have a feeling next time she sees him, she might just smack him and he would have no idea why XD

Aww daddy Doctor is super adorable! I can never tire from reading it. Kinda wish the three could go on more adventures but hey there's always the next installment. What with Rose' s odd timeline maybe it'll happen?

The amount of feels I got from this chapter had me crying happy tears. The Doctor with his daughter was just so beautiful and moving. And Rose's own emotional state made it even better. This has got to be the best reaction I've read of the Doctor being a father again. I really wish I could read him going through fatherhood with Rose of course :3

So glad I've finally had time to read this! It may not be Christmas anymore but with the snow outside right now I can pretend it is. That's one way for the Doctor too find out about his daughter XD